Hope Engel 📚
@hopeengel.com
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https://hopeengel.com Reader, writer, cat mom, based in NY. Querying my debut romance, “At Your Pace” Looking for romance novel critique partners - DM me! 46 books in 2025!
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Emerson knows in baseball you win some and you lose some so he appreciates the wins as part of the whole team. I need to think on this more specifically as I write the section of the book with actual baseball in it!
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So helpful, such valuable feedback!
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Picked these up at a Halloween craft market! #halloween #bookmarks
Photo of two bookmarks, one is pink and circular and says “hot girls read” and the other has Halloween themed illustrations
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Three of my alpha readers read as I finished sections and gave feedback that shaped the story and it was so helpful. It helped me get over the fear of asking for feedback because even I knew it wasn’t final. I wasn’t overly attached to anything in the story!
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Do you show your WIP to anyone before you finish it? I never do until my stories shape shift into their final form #writingq #WritingCommunity
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It should when I get a chance to rework it! I need to do some work along the way to make the end payoff make sense (I always knew how the story ended) when I can get back to writing when my calendar chills out
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I needed a stronger inciting incident - before it was murky. Emerson was always going to be captain, but I’m making it a bigger deal now.
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The pesky aunties!!!
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Yes I love those moments in stories where we get the character’s thoughts or reflections to what’s happening plot wise! Adds a fun dynamic
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I wish I had a more polished version but I am firmly in “rough first draft” mode for this one!

And it all came out after alpha feedback from @aiko-aslanian.bsky.social that inspired me to make this more prominent as the inciting incident.

I guess all of book 1 is a how we got here though 😅
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WIP snips: “Hope” ✨

Emerson reflects on the news of becoming captain at the start of the sequel.

Also, Google Docs pulled up every document I have when I searched because my name is Hope. Not helpful.

#romance #amwriting #wipsnips
   A deep sense of satisfaction unfurls in my chest as I hear what Coach says. I don’t know if it’s weird to be so proud of myself to have been chosen, but I am honored to have been one of the three out of the fifteen or so upper classmen that could’ve been named Captain. Deep down I knew I wanted it, but I didn’t want to admit it too widely. 
      Valeria had asked once over the summer if I thought I had a chance, and I said “maybe.”
      I just really hope that training on just the weeknights after work this past summer will be sufficient since I spent most weekends with her instead of in the gym.
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Just gonna say this is MY MOMENT and I’ll quote post this for posterity when I find my snippet
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“Wall sex” I was like what’s this new term

It is… what it sounds like
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Loooove some gentle trash talk
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This text thread reminds me of my and my husband’s cousin 😅
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Love this tender moment!
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“Total limp fish” 😅
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One I googled thinking it was something more complicated than it was and turns out nope being my normal painfully literally self would have been fine 😅
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Drop a hint! What’s the main color or vibe??? (You don’t have to, just I’m here to hype people up!)!
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Emerson is methodical with his workouts but a little more go with the flow - taking assignments in terms of due dates rather than other importance/priority. He is used to just winging but is a little bit of a planner when he really cares about something.
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Pastels are soooo cute I’m here for it
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How about a section called “we’re even now” where you call out people whose treatment of you inspired some element of the novel or the motivation to be successful out of spite? #amwriting