The commissioner wasn't much of an artist themselves so they allowed me to make a few suggestions! The scarf, eye color and the slightly altered palette to better match the trans flag colors were small changes that i hoped would make the drawing more cohesive!
It is harder to nail the anatomy on simpler characters, any mistakes are highly visible, specially if they are a bird which i'm not used to drawing haha but I'm glad you think i did it well!
That is so sweet of you, I hadn't received such a long and thoughtful comment for so long in this fast paced world. Means the world, I'm so glad you liked it and that you were able to notice all the minute details I hide :)