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長年の友人Muddasheepさん( @muddasheep.bsky.social )が開発してるローグライクカードゲーム、Faith in DespairのDEMO版(とフル版)
に私の日本語が実装されました。よろしくお願いします。

Faith in Despair, my friend Muddasheep's game now has my Japanese texts for the DEMO (and full game).

Faith in Despair on Steam

Welcome to Hell, Faith. Prepare your cards with triggers, actions and modifiers, and play a grim game against Death for eternity.

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Thibault Ortega @tortegatrad.bsky.social · Sep 5

I'm still in the first act of the game, but yes, the amount of errors I've seen that would've been caught just with basic proofreading is, unfortunately, quite high. More examples below (spoilers for very early-game content, mistakes explained in ALT)

Screenshot of the Hunter's March map, which can be purchased from a certain NPC.
The name of the area has been acceptably translated as "Sentier du Chasseur" in the world map UI. However, here, it has been translated as "Avancé du Chasseur", which 1) is a literal translation that is incorrect contextually, and 2) contains a typo ("avancé" as a noun is spelled "avancée").

Screenshot of the moment a player acquires the Silk Spear ability.

"Appuyer <button>" is grammatically incorrect. This should say "Appuyer sur <button>".

Screenshot of the description of the Memory Locket item.
- "Permets d'améliorer un emblème" should be "Permet d'améliorer un emblème"
- "Les emblèmes peuvent être améliorer [...]" -> "Les emblèmes peuvent être améliorés [...]".
Again, two basic errors that could've been caught with minimal proofreading.

Screenshot of a conversation with a certain NPC.
- "Je suis venue jusqu'à Pharloom [...] -> "Je suis venue à Pharloom [...]". The "jusqu'à" is superfluous here
- In French, many punctuation signs (in this case, question marks) must be preceded by a non-breaking space (this one also looks rather out-of-place here, a period would be more appropriate). I've seen this kind of error a few more times in other places, notably with colons
- A recurring issue in many many dialogues so far: the underuse of commas. I don't have access to the source text here but if we're to keep this particular phrasing, commas should be added after "moi" and "maintenant", like so: "Elle était plus rapide que moi, et maintenant, j'ai perdu sa trace".

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Toyoch @toyoch.bsky.social · Aug 25

きた

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Toyoch @toyoch.bsky.social · Aug 19

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スチムーライブラリに850本以上FPSが入ってて、スチムーが登場する前後から400本以上はプレイしてる(現在は数え切れてない)私が今でもベスト５に入れられるぐらい大好きなFPSのリマスターが来ました
(オタク固有の早口)

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Toyoch @toyoch.bsky.social · Jun 19

きた

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𝐅𝐫𝐨𝐦 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐕𝐨𝐢𝐝 💫 Game localizers @fromthevoid.net · Jun 18

Let's use this #WishlistWednesday to showcase our favorite indies!

Today, a survival horror game in space with zombie plants and VOID in the name. What else could we ask for? 💫

@dandelionvoid.bsky.social‬ our voidian team cannot wait to play your game 🤍
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Dandelion Void on Steam

Explore jungle-choked corridors of a derelict ark, adrift between the stars. Construct shelters and loot powerful artifacts from the skeletal remains of your starfaring ancestors. But never let your…

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Toyoch @toyoch.bsky.social · Jun 4

Switch 2の支払い済ませてきた
多言語版、マリカーとふしぎ展入れて75000円

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🌳 Muri: Wildwoods - a cozy cleaning adventure @speldosagames.bsky.social · Jun 2

𝗠𝘂𝗿𝗶 𝗺𝗮𝗱𝗲 𝗶𝘁 𝘁𝗼 𝗪𝗵𝗼𝗹𝗲𝘀𝗼𝗺𝗲 𝗗𝗶𝗿𝗲𝗰𝘁! ˚ ｡⋆

We're so happy to see Muri on the big screen📺Will you be tuning into the showcase this Saturday? ♡ #WholesomeDirect

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Toyoch @toyoch.bsky.social · May 31

なで

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Toyoch @toyoch.bsky.social · May 30

FPSの英日翻訳したい (定期)

Always on lookout for EN>JP localization on FPSes

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Toyoch @toyoch.bsky.social · Dec 24

固定/PINNED

英語と日英翻訳(特にゲーム関係)のご依頼(相談)は随時受け付けています。気軽にリプかDMください。

I do JP-EN(both ways) localization, mostly for videogames. Hit me up with replies or DM.

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Toyoch @toyoch.bsky.social · May 18

普段はついったーにいるんですよ
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Dan DiIorio @trampolinetales.com · May 2

📣 MAZE MICE IS OUT NOW!

It's a bullet heaven roguelite where time only moves when you move.

I’m so thrilled to bring my next game to you. 🐭❤️

Get it here: MazeMice.com

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Toyoch @toyoch.bsky.social · May 2

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Maze Mice 発売しました。翻訳してたのでよろしくお願いしマウス

I did Japanese translation for Maze Mice, just released today

Save 10% on Maze Mice on Steam

Maze Mice is a bullet heaven roguelite where time only moves when you move. Collect dots, level up, choose upgrades, and avoid cats. All at your own pace.

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Toyoch @toyoch.bsky.social · Apr 30

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発売した　日本語翻訳してました

I did the Japanese text for Skin Deep

Save 10% on Skin Deep on Steam

Skin Deep is an immersive first-person shooter. We got sneezing. We got things getting stuck in your feet. Stalk through a vast non-linear starship and sneak, subvert, and sabotage to survive in this ...

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SHOTGUN COP MAN 🚨 Out now on Steam and Switch 🚨 @deadtoast.com · Apr 30

TOMORROW

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Toyoch @toyoch.bsky.social · Apr 30

Robot girls are so good

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Toyoch @toyoch.bsky.social · Apr 30

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発売した　日本語翻訳してました

I did the Japanese text for Skin Deep

Save 10% on Skin Deep on Steam

Skin Deep is an immersive first-person shooter. We got sneezing. We got things getting stuck in your feet. Stalk through a vast non-linear starship and sneak, subvert, and sabotage to survive in this ...

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Jacob Vela @jacobvela.bsky.social · Apr 23

I have posted the trailer and release date for Star Rift Saga. Check it out! (Featuring music by @vincentcolavita.bsky.social) The game will be releasing on July 15.
There is also a demo available now on the Steam page, because I've waited long enough and won't wait for the Steam Next Fest in June.

Star Rift Saga Gameplay Trailer | Release Date and Demo

YouTube video by Studio Vela

youtu.be

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AUTOMATON（オートマトン） @automaton-media.com · Apr 18

大人気研究施設サバイバル『Abiotic Factor』5月2日に定価値上げへ。でも値上げまで“駆け込みセール”実施中
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Deep Field Gamesは4月18日、『Abiotic Factor』を5月2日より値上げすると発表。本作は現在PC（Steam）向けに早期アクセス配信中で、今夏の正式リリースに向けた値上げとなる。

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🌳 Muri: Wildwoods - a cozy cleaning adventure @speldosagames.bsky.social · Apr 9

How do people describe our game:

- Like cute furry Powerwash Sim
- Mario Sunshine meets Ghibli
- is that a fish-mermaid-cat-mouse-rat-alien-axolotl main character?

#Indiedev #Indiegames #Cozygames

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