After experiencing the luxury of writing for a visual novel, having to again write "x said" after dialogue is like coming home from a vacation to a sleet storm.

I wrote for a visual novel! You should definitely try it, just look at these cuties 🥰
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Do you know the podcast "Writing Excuses"? They have more than one episode about pacing, I recall ep 19.04 was at least helpful. 🤔

if it helps, though i know nothing about them i'm very excited for your original lesbians!

I did it... I sent off a short story to a competition!!! The story rly refused to be finished, I started writing it a year ago :'^) Made my poor gf read it three whole times. Now I can finally write something elseeee

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Popular writing advice often says to "not underestimate the reader", but... I just shared a piece of short fiction with a writing group, and nobody got what I was going for 😂😭 It was definitely my bad though! A good reminder to not swing too far towards the obscure end of the spectrum either 😂

Sleeping with the window open is so cozy, so nice, all the good things, but getting up with the window open is savage mode 💀

A forever wip of shu's act4 outfit. In the end it was too hard to draw 😭

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