"To see himself alive through this, he would have to cross the lion and hope his fox tricks would be enough to keep its jaws at bay." (Lions and Rats, copyrighted)
April 1, 2025 at 8:37 AM
"To see himself alive through this, he would have to cross the lion and hope his fox tricks would be enough to keep its jaws at bay." (Lions and Rats, copyrighted)
When he finally opened his eyes, his father stood in front of him. The man’s hand was reaching for the boy’s shoulder. Just an inch and it would’ve touched it. Morgan drew back.
March 29, 2025 at 9:31 AM
When he finally opened his eyes, his father stood in front of him. The man’s hand was reaching for the boy’s shoulder. Just an inch and it would’ve touched it. Morgan drew back.
Was this mine? I had an agent suggest I end with a few questions, And I thought that s what a ql does, explain everything în only a few words, plot, characters, stakes and all. I sprinkled a few events just to make the agent more interested.
March 27, 2025 at 5:40 PM
Was this mine? I had an agent suggest I end with a few questions, And I thought that s what a ql does, explain everything în only a few words, plot, characters, stakes and all. I sprinkled a few events just to make the agent more interested.
Thank you. Actually, no. We are în omniscient pov, but if we were în third person limited, it would ve been Morgan's pov. I wanted to know if there's a way of saying it, because omniscient pov seems to be out of favour.
March 19, 2025 at 7:20 PM
Thank you. Actually, no. We are în omniscient pov, but if we were în third person limited, it would ve been Morgan's pov. I wanted to know if there's a way of saying it, because omniscient pov seems to be out of favour.
Hii. Morgan is my mc and Ignatius is his father. My question is how do I turn this into 3rd pov limited: "I haven t slept for two days," Morgan said. Ignatius'eyes softened as he watched his son wash his face. Morgan didn t notice.
March 19, 2025 at 7:09 PM
Hii. Morgan is my mc and Ignatius is his father. My question is how do I turn this into 3rd pov limited: "I haven t slept for two days," Morgan said. Ignatius'eyes softened as he watched his son wash his face. Morgan didn t notice.