Coach Mel
@askcoachmel.bsky.social
Former elite athlete, Aths Aus level 2 coach, lover of writing, live music, craft beer. Very proud Mum of a boy with Dravet Syndrome, hoping for a cure 💜
Your writing is great, truly.. but I think first chapter; the scene set is dancing, lost, Born Slippy playing, would get a reader engrossed... wondering why. But I'm not a writer, just an avid reader... Great to see it shared. x
February 11, 2026 at 9:52 AM
Your writing is great, truly.. but I think first chapter; the scene set is dancing, lost, Born Slippy playing, would get a reader engrossed... wondering why. But I'm not a writer, just an avid reader... Great to see it shared. x