Thank you 😊
Thank you 😊
The "after" is a result of both me and my editor understanding the lack of depth in this scene and recognizing the distancing.
Which version do you like more?
The "after" is a result of both me and my editor understanding the lack of depth in this scene and recognizing the distancing.
Which version do you like more?
They say first paragraph is so very important. It either draws the reader in, or it doesn't, but the latter might make them decide to drop the book.
So, are you intrigued?
They say first paragraph is so very important. It either draws the reader in, or it doesn't, but the latter might make them decide to drop the book.
So, are you intrigued?
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