Elijah Yaks
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copybyelijah.bsky.social
Elijah Yaks
@copybyelijah.bsky.social
Conversion copywriter for coaches. Fix your "Book a Call" page to get more clients. Stop leaving money on the table. Free audit.
Big lesson:
Even coaches with real results lose clients when their funnel lacks clarity.
Your offer can be great. Your results can be proven.
But if your path to booking feels like a maze, people won't convert.
What would you fix first?
January 15, 2026 at 8:27 AM
The fix: Put the sales page FIRST.
Show the transformations, testimonials, and proof BEFORE asking for the call.
Let the results sell the conversation.
Then booking becomes the natural next step.
January 15, 2026 at 8:27 AM
Problem #3: His BEST content is buried.
He has client transformations, testimonials, certifications—all hidden on page 2 of the Linktree.
Most visitors never see it because they click "Book a call" first.
January 15, 2026 at 8:27 AM
The fix: Pre-frame the call.
"On this 15-min call, we'll:
✓ Review your fitness situation
✓ Identify what's blocking progress
✓ Create your action plan
This is for busy professionals (I've helped 100+ lose 10-20kg).
Not for quick-fix seekers."
January 15, 2026 at 8:27 AM
Problem #2: The booking page has zero context.
Just says "Enquiry Call for Health & Fitness" then straight to calendar.
No call agenda. No results proof. No qualifier.
January 15, 2026 at 8:27 AM
The fix: ONE clear funnel.
Step 1: Landing page (with results + what you get)
Step 2: Coaching plans (with pricing)
Step 3: Book call (with qualified leads only)
Every extra option is a decision—and decisions kill conversions.
January 15, 2026 at 8:27 AM
Problem #1: The Linktree is a mess.
"Book a call" competes with "1:1 Coaching Plans," protein lab reports, honey testing, shoe guides, and his music.
A visitor has 8+ options when they should have ONE clear path.
January 15, 2026 at 8:27 AM