By not writing as many words as you 😂

The Valtay taking over from Borant, the weird thinking Carl going through (river running in his head), the Feral gods, his use of the ring, the warlord thing on 9th floor, the Zerzura/changelings…
The Goat thing knowing…well, everything.

the worldbuilding (the religion, the magicks, the war). It feels like that was actually interesting, but left so blurry as to feel contradictory whenever a new part was shoved in to move the “love story” on a bit more.

I have just bought a co-op game called Mythwind which sounds really interesting, but haven’t played it yet to see how it works.

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the good reasons he had!”
As for the background of the world (the crux, the monsters, the Voster magic, the alchemists, the gods, the other bloody kingdoms, the peace treaty), needed a lot more context and explanation. Not for me.

See you there boyo!

Are you being mean to Bear? She will not be happy with you.

3: Your NPCs look great. Stop looking for flaws, and think how you would feel about it if this was someone else giving one to you.
4: Gin.