I teach chem in a narrative style using examples from life, history, pop culture, etc. The students love it & most importantly, they learn.
If there's no picture in your reader's mind & nothing compelling in the narrative, how can it be memorable? Why would they come back for more?
Keep the lyricism

And Paradise.

Whoa. Delope is a word. Did Merriam-Webster deliberately miss the mark?

The fashion plates from this time are fascinating. Women were shown with no squareness to the shoulders—just this odd slope from the neck to the shoulder. To me, this style & other styles like it, seem to emphasize or try to create this sloped shoulder line
Perhaps square shoulders weren't ladylike?

I'm SO jealous! I'd crawl over hot rocks to watch anything by Park Chan-Wook

Groovy!

FFS. People went to Firefox because they didn't want AI & all the other BS other companies do.

Tell your CEO that just because there is an AI hammer, it doesn't mean that everything is a nail.

And his live ON:E performance finished all of us
youtu.be/oHzmOe-2sOM?...

69 years old and I am this person, too. 💜💜💜

What an insult to the original construction workers