I think writing from the heart is the best approach. Has anyone told you you look like Barbra Streisand?

Heart for sure. :)

Great idea putting other parts of different manuscripts together. I loved your metaphors and the interactive video. Which app did you use to create the video? Thanks for offering to critique the winners' PBs.

Done. Phew! Thank you all for organizing this Zombie week, and especially to the donors. I appreciate you taking the time to critique our MSs. I never entered in the past years. Silly me. I thought I had to write about zombies. Now my drawer is bursting with zombies pleading to get out. :)

My, oh no's? My CPs asked- Who is the main character? Perhaps change it to...Sometimes, I forget to leave space for the illustrator, because I get carried away with descriptions since I write across genres. I'm revising once more, cutting the unnecessary words and passive verbs. 🙄

I don't know which is the most outdated, but I struggled to find the washers and dryers empty on weekends.