In the end, she still clings onto the hope of finding normalcy despite her infested body, and works to regain the life she once had.

This is a simple story concept about how unmoderated self-indulgence can quickly lead to ruin.

Yeah.

That's why I suggested to keep it small-scale, so it won't be too hard whilst allowing you to test the waters.

It may sound niche, but short-chap titles on X/Twitter (like those made in SEA) are becoming popular lately. You might benefit from hopping on that bandwagon.

Yeah, I understand your situation.

For me, as a reader, I've read a lot of titles that might have potential, but ended too abruptly. And recent fetish novels on Literotica no longer have that spark in them, like what sexgundam666 (and certain others) had.

God! I there were more people like them.

Understandable and—sheesh???

You make things like this, at such quality, in a week?!

You got mad hands, I tell you.

Though, imo, I think it would be good if you also made series with 4 panels per chapter and is updated every month or so.

Having something like this would help attract people 2 u.

An 18+ drama between two opposites: Emily—a timid, yet hardworking girl—and Lynn, the bossy slut.

Like... balancing the messed up bits with the good bits would've been more impactful due to its juxtaposition.

[I know you ain't asking for this, but]

I wasn't expecting that plot twist. Honestly, it went overboard. It started out interesting, but fell off from being too excessive.

The beginning sounded like an intro to a pretty good novel in Literotica, ngl.