Your phrasing sucks here, but also using the word “pandering” in place of “promising” and using vague “the community” plus the pronoun “their” when it is not clear if you’re praising or rebuking Black Americans (cont)
Your phrasing sucks here, but also using the word “pandering” in place of “promising” and using vague “the community” plus the pronoun “their” when it is not clear if you’re praising or rebuking Black Americans (cont)