A lot of rewriting in this that the snippet I've posted before doesn't exist anymore so here's a different scene where the mc is smashed
A lot of rewriting in this that the snippet I've posted before doesn't exist anymore so here's a different scene where the mc is smashed
Part of cutting chapters/scenes is writing new ones. This is a new chapter so I have nothing to compare it to
Part of cutting chapters/scenes is writing new ones. This is a new chapter so I have nothing to compare it to
😀: editing a chapter where my mc travels for the first time
😞: he's alone and the chapter is about loneliness
😀: editing a chapter where my mc travels for the first time
😞: he's alone and the chapter is about loneliness
My dialogues still need a lot of work
My dialogues still need a lot of work
Got rid of the part where I'd written that mc could understand the bird because it was already obvious
Got rid of the part where I'd written that mc could understand the bird because it was already obvious
Originally, I wanted to hint the existence of aswangs in my story here, but it didn't fit so I had to cut it
Originally, I wanted to hint the existence of aswangs in my story here, but it didn't fit so I had to cut it
Nothing much here. I'm showing an extra line for more context
Nothing much here. I'm showing an extra line for more context
I've trimmed the paragraph because there are too many words for what I need it to do
I've trimmed the paragraph because there are too many words for what I need it to do