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Their no problem with it being historical but it lack a good narrative. Like is their mystery in board, murder, sex. It seem like there something happening on board but never explain more than everyone acting snobbish
March 28, 2025 at 5:56 AM
Their no problem with it being historical but it lack a good narrative. Like is their mystery in board, murder, sex. It seem like there something happening on board but never explain more than everyone acting snobbish
Ok first I have to say they are a few thing with the book I would like to say as a bit of an advice. For one the book doesn’t give a good description of the genre of the story or the gist of something amiss on board. Is there a murder? Why is he on a ship of elite if he want to get a fresh start?
March 26, 2025 at 9:19 PM
Ok first I have to say they are a few thing with the book I would like to say as a bit of an advice. For one the book doesn’t give a good description of the genre of the story or the gist of something amiss on board. Is there a murder? Why is he on a ship of elite if he want to get a fresh start?