Thanks for the advice 🥰
Perhaps i try a few different directions and see what feels right 🖊

What if it is a dual point of view?
Would it feel weird/jarring to a reader if their choice of words/descriptions were very different (rough mc vs a more poetic minded mc?)

I've read Aguirre's Strange Love, and have Grimspace on my list. Along time ago i read Clean Sweep, but havent looked at Ilona's scifi truff yet.🤔
TY for the reccs! 🤩

This looks so cute! My son needs to know the joy of choose your own adventure books!

Poor Carl, im rootin' for him (and his poor legs)

AI detectors are the new snake oil, tbh i'm appalled that universities and other institutions buy into them. I can't imagine how bad students have it if everything they write creates these false positives.