I love that King's Rest has moon worship iconography. It also suggests that Zandalari once worshipped a serpent who ate the souls of the unworthy.

Here is where they could have added more of a connection between the Nerubians and Maldraxxus. The Old Gods were hinted at having connections to Maldraxxus and the word usage here to say "Fleshcrafting" without saying fleshcrating is a choice.

I hope her body can be found by the player character. Why put in neat things like this if we can't stumble on her mummified corpse and recover her knowledge? This is where Archaeology profession could be utilized to provide more immersion.

Thoughts on the first chapter: It seemed to resolve the conflict really fast even though it was satisfying. There was no prolonged struggle and the threats did not seem too big, which gives me mixed emotions, i honestly don't know where they are going to go next there's no set up