O.C. Umeghalu is querying a YA Fantasy✨
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the #agentguide for the dual-pov YA Fantasy (109k) I'm currently querying! 📖

AWAKENING is a story on the effects of guilt, the consequences of betrayal and the summons of destiny 🗡️🥀

REALM BREAKER x ATLA x HEIR

#YA #F #querying #agentsguide #BVM #writing #litagents
an agent's guide to awakening by o.c. umeghalu the pitch - For Cindren Alacaster, guilt is her anchor as much as it is her jailer. Thrust upon a whirlwind journey to rescue her friend from certain death, she finds that the abnormality of her golden eyes speaks of a heroic ancestry whispered amongst the forsaken. Something once slumbering has emerged in totality, painting her destiny as dark as the cloak she was born to wear.

As the country’s prince, Nazar Heiron should know better than looking to follow his own heart. But the stirring of longing he’s hidden deep within forces him to walk the razor-thin line of desire and treachery for the only girl he’s ever loved: his personal sentry. And when the truth of the last war to be fought on his country’s soil emerges, he must decide whether or not to put into practice once empty words that championed justice or finally step into the hypocrisy he’s believed to nurture. themes/comps - Forged Family (the Gaang, Quil and the others)

Reckoning with Inner Turmoil (guilt, indecision, shame, responsibility) 

Ancestral Abilities (think Aang’s/Corayne’s birthrights)

Bloodied Crown (think Zuko grappling with the Fire Nation seeking to conquer the world/Corayne looking to close  Spindles opened by her uncle)

Looming Global Threat (ie: Firelord Ozai/Taristan)

Romantic Subplot (different love interest for each MC)

Complicated Sibling Relationship (ie: Azula and Zuko)

Betrayal (ie: Aiz and Quil) samples
ocumeghalu.bsky.social
ended off my first #DVpit with 3 interested parties!! (saw an editor repost that left me completely STUNNED after an exam and i almost keeled right over 😭)

so, so grateful for this opportunity and the support i received 🫶🏿
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hi--dropping this here because I'm a little lost in regards to contact you. I received a like from you on my pitch (still struggling to get myself off the floor!!) but I've submitted a query to an agent at writer's house that hasn't been replied to yet. would I still be able to send my query over?
ocumeghalu.bsky.social
this sounds like such a nice read to curl up with rn 🫶🏿
ocumeghalu.bsky.social
REALM BREAKER x ATLA x HEIR

Cindren and Kasiel have always been close, his presence one of the few comforts that persisted after her parents were executed. But as they journey in the direction of fate's twisted strings, an ember of growing affection is given welcome fuel.

#DVpit #YA #F #BVM
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REALM BREAKER x ATLA x HEIR

A prince should know better than being guided by his own heart, but the stirring of longing that emerges in Nazar forces him to walk the thin line of desire and treachery for the girl that's distraction and necessity both: Vris, his personal sentry.

#DVpit #YA #F #BVM
ocumeghalu.bsky.social
REALM BREAKER x ATLA x HEIR

A century's old war threatens to reemerge and the descendants of those that subdued the threat have risen once more. But with a monarchy's army on their heels and betrayal within their midst, accomplishing what their ancestors had may be forlorn.

#DVpit #YA #F #BVM
ocumeghalu.bsky.social
REALM BREAKER x ATLA x HEIR

When the histories he'd been taught begin to crumble beneath truth, Nazar, torn between loyalty to a cruel creed upheld by his family and what he knows is just, is forced to contend with a difficult question: am I willing to watch the world burn?

#DVpit #YA #F #BVM
ocumeghalu.bsky.social
REALM BREAKER x ATLA x HEIR

When once thought mythical saviors stir the heroic ancestry in her blood, golden-eyed Cindren must race against time to rescue her imprisoned friend while running from a traitor to the ancient line of warriors she finds herself apart of.

#DVpit #YA #F #BVM
ocumeghalu.bsky.social
REALM BREAKER x ATLA x HEIR

An heir saddled with indecision and his sister with a hardened heart harbor a tumultuous relationship, but as echoes of the last war to be fought evolve into a battle cry with a rising threat, their differing stances risk severing their bond for good.

#DVpit #YA #F #BVM
ocumeghalu.bsky.social
the art is beautiful and the story sounds great!!
ocumeghalu.bsky.social
REALM BREAKER x ATLA x HEIR

Cindren's eyes morphed from dark brown to honey before the gilded color of gold that speaks of stories whispered amongst the forsaken. Something once slumbering has emerged within her, painting her destiny as dark as the cloak she was born to wear.

#DVpit #YA #F #BVM
crimson cloak
ocumeghalu.bsky.social
tyyy! the suspense and contemporary are currently tied for "favorite WIP" atm 🙂‍↕️
ocumeghalu.bsky.social
#Dvparty Day 6 (part 2) - WIPs ✍🏿

Contemporary WIP 🎥 - a screenwriter struggling with grief + mother’s ailment x retreat where she sees ex-best friend for the first time in two years

Romance WIP ❤️‍🩹 - up and coming baker x tech exec who paints x heartbreak x second chances

#NA #romance #contemporary
Contemporary WIP - a screenwriter struggling with grief + mother’s ailment x retreat where she sees ex-best friend for the first time in two years Romance WIP - up and coming baker x tech exec who paints x heartbreak x second chances
ocumeghalu.bsky.social
#DvParty Day 6 - WIPs ✍🏿

YA Romance 💘- academic rivals x familial expectations x competitive Ivy League prep program x he fell first

Suspense ⛓️‍💥- a woman suffering from brain fog starts to unravel a thread that paints the life she’s living as a carefully curated illusion

#wip #YA #romance #suspense
YA Romance WIP - academic rivals x familial expectations x competitive Ivy League boot camp x he fell first suspence wip - a woman suffering from persistent brain fog starts to unravel a thread that paints the life she’s living as a carefully curated illusion
ocumeghalu.bsky.social
the #agentguide for the dual-pov YA Fantasy (109k) I'm currently querying! 📖

AWAKENING is a story on the effects of guilt, the consequences of betrayal and the summons of destiny 🗡️🥀

REALM BREAKER x ATLA x HEIR

#YA #F #querying #agentsguide #BVM #writing #litagents
an agent's guide to awakening by o.c. umeghalu the pitch - For Cindren Alacaster, guilt is her anchor as much as it is her jailer. Thrust upon a whirlwind journey to rescue her friend from certain death, she finds that the abnormality of her golden eyes speaks of a heroic ancestry whispered amongst the forsaken. Something once slumbering has emerged in totality, painting her destiny as dark as the cloak she was born to wear.

As the country’s prince, Nazar Heiron should know better than looking to follow his own heart. But the stirring of longing he’s hidden deep within forces him to walk the razor-thin line of desire and treachery for the only girl he’s ever loved: his personal sentry. And when the truth of the last war to be fought on his country’s soil emerges, he must decide whether or not to put into practice once empty words that championed justice or finally step into the hypocrisy he’s believed to nurture. themes/comps - Forged Family (the Gaang, Quil and the others)

Reckoning with Inner Turmoil (guilt, indecision, shame, responsibility) 

Ancestral Abilities (think Aang’s/Corayne’s birthrights)

Bloodied Crown (think Zuko grappling with the Fire Nation seeking to conquer the world/Corayne looking to close  Spindles opened by her uncle)

Looming Global Threat (ie: Firelord Ozai/Taristan)

Romantic Subplot (different love interest for each MC)

Complicated Sibling Relationship (ie: Azula and Zuko)

Betrayal (ie: Aiz and Quil) samples
ocumeghalu.bsky.social
#DVparty Day 4 - aspects of the dual-pov YA Fantasy book i'm querying in memes ⚔️ (#1 for my FMC and #2 for my MMC)

#YA #F #querying #writersky #booksky #BVM
when the crazy guy that shows up on your doorstep is the only plausible way of escaping capture when your father’s the king and his rule is absolute but the girl you like wants you to defy him
ocumeghalu.bsky.social
it's actually so bad i need my query tracker and email locked for my own sanity atp 💀