Finnish pronouns surely don't work like that and doesn't generally do reduplication! You could pretend it's inspired by the "English pattern" "bye bye" and it would be as accurate! Anyway, wan and mute already exist whenever one wish to be explicit about singular or plural.

a! nasa ni li pona!

Ha.... wow, this feels quite similar to sitelen pona :)

jan ale o musi kepeken toki pona.

o kama pona lon kulupu pi toki pona

No, there's no AI-generated content in the su book. I think you should be aware. And it's very improper to make such statements publicly without verifying the facts.

moku laso li sama telo taso ona li ko. musi. pona!

So, maybe, just one example how I could translate:
tenpo ni la, mije li tawa weka. meli li tawa poka.
pakala la mije li tawa anpa lon wile ona ala.
telo sijelo ona li kama loje e sinpin meli.

- why repeat tenpo lon ?
- "en" doesn't mean "and", it doesnt connect sentences.
- li pakala ... without the original, i'd thought that maybe the man was attacking
- last ona talks about whom (the meli or the mije)? It's not so clear.
- "blood"... yes, it could be anything else than "telo loje"

At least today, I got the same feeling.

J'adore ce genre de text-art retro. Super!

""musi supa"