Is this not more of a "while you fight" than a "as soon as you fight"? Then it would be {DaghobtaHvIS, qaSpu'DI' lup 'ej bISuvtaHchugh} "while you fight, as soon as a minute has happened, if you continue to fight.... "

For the second part, I wonder if {Qa} is the correct verb. Does the actual size of the power increase? Like, physically grow bigger? That's what {Qa} is (like a balloon grows bigger, but the amount of material stays the same). {ghur} is for having more of the same (anger and attack range can {ghur})

For the first part, once you add {-vo'} onto {'oH} it's no longer the object of {ghan}, so it becomes, "if one looks at him/her/it in the direction away from it". I suggest {jaghvetlh bejlu' 'e' mevlu'chugh} "if one stops watching that enemy" or something like that.

I don't believe you need the {-lu'} in there. You can just say {maw'Ha''eghchoHmoHmeH may'} "the battle for the purpose self-un-crazying".

This based on things like {ghojmeH taj} "a knife for the purpose of learning" that doesn't use {-lu'} even though there's no stated subject.

Glasses, as in the things you put on your face, is {neqratlh}.

jIbuD 'e' ghaS. Dayaj DaneHchugh, DIvI' Hol mu'ghom yIlo'!

I can't see it on this machine, but I'm assuming this is a  for ?

tlhIngan Hol ghItlhta' paqvam = This book has written the Klingon language.

{ghItlh} lo'laHbe' mu'tlheghvetlh, SetqIn chaq {ngaS} {lo'} ghap lo'.

DIvI' Hol jIyweS vIraS Hol jIyweS je Hutlh = it lacks English and French translations.

majQa'. pIj Dalo''a'?

nuqjatlh?

Dojqu'! Qapla'!

qu' mInDu'!

cha' Daqtagh, cha' QIS, wa' yan, wa' QIn, wa' 'aqleH je vIlegh. qutluch vIleghbe'.