my dearest doomed couple (I’m so normal about them)

and actually first person is my bread and butter but when I started writing fanfiction I learned it was SO hated so I trained myself to write in third and now that I have both in my wheelhouse I really have to think about what the right answer is and how much is just leftover bias from that

I hit this dilemma with literally every project, the first vs third pov decision is truly my curse

thank you!! happy to have you here 🤍

I know that first lines are supposed to pack a punch and set up the entire rest of the book so I always feel so much pressure in writing them! but these, I’m pretty happy with & I feel like they get the job done

the last two wips are told from dual povs so I decided to toss in the first lines of each narrators first chapter