There is a diverse cast of characters in this novel, found family trope, and a focus on imperialism. The comps for my book are Netflix’s “Voltron:Legendary Defender,” Marvel’s “Guardians of the Galaxy,” and M.K. England’s “The Disasters”

I’m looking for feedback on:
-Story flow, plot holes, and attention grabbing
-Character development and relationships
-Grammar and sentence structure

Deadline: February 20-March 31

Thank you! I agree, seeing it and being able to make the edits with a pen is a great experience!

The nutrition facts are pure gold! I can’t wait to read this one day!!

And I really hope to one day share them with others :)

Thank you so much this is so helpful!!

Thank you!
It’s about a group of people (+ an alien) who have to use five powerful ships to defeat a ruler who’s trying to take control of the entire universe. It’s inspired by Voltron, Guardians of the Galaxy, and The Disasters :)