Also writing is a skill to practice

It's not fair to compare your first rough draft (which you know exactly what parts you think are bad) to something someone else shared (polished enough to show to the general public, and you don't know which parts the author sees as bad writing)

Hey no. Your writing is really good and fun!

Ough tailmaws goood

Mmmmmm

I just recently started playing her in a DND campaign, she's a grouchy loner but cares so much I love her.

What if I already have a snake oc?

I'm convinced Sony is trying to kill off a bunch of their game studios