Your series sounds amazing! I’d love to read and give detailed feedback on the story, characters, and world-building. Which book would you recommend starting with for the best experience?
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February 17, 2026 at 12:10 AM
Your series sounds amazing! I’d love to read and give detailed feedback on the story, characters, and world-building. Which book would you recommend starting with for the best experience?
Powerful and painful. The imagery hits hard , bureaucracy versus humanity, paper versus a life. “White sheets loom over black bodies” is a line that lingers. Thank you for sharing this
February 16, 2026 at 11:18 PM
Powerful and painful. The imagery hits hard , bureaucracy versus humanity, paper versus a life. “White sheets loom over black bodies” is a line that lingers. Thank you for sharing this
Congrats on your 3rd novel , and a five-book series is seriously impressive . The blend of fantasy romance and sci-fi action sounds like a wild ride. Happy BHM
February 16, 2026 at 11:01 PM
Congrats on your 3rd novel , and a five-book series is seriously impressive . The blend of fantasy romance and sci-fi action sounds like a wild ride. Happy BHM
Huge congrats on Chapter 2. Noir + murder mystery is such a fun combo, and this premise sounds seriously intriguing. Also love seeing betas get the appreciation they deserve 💗 If you ever need an extra set of eyes for future chapters, I’d be happy to help!
February 16, 2026 at 10:42 PM
Huge congrats on Chapter 2. Noir + murder mystery is such a fun combo, and this premise sounds seriously intriguing. Also love seeing betas get the appreciation they deserve 💗 If you ever need an extra set of eyes for future chapters, I’d be happy to help!
That sounds like a very thoughtful process. I’m sorry your betas had to step away , life really does happen. If you still need a reliable reader, I’d be happy to step in and provide thorough, honest feedback before your editor’s final pass.
February 16, 2026 at 10:37 PM
That sounds like a very thoughtful process. I’m sorry your betas had to step away , life really does happen. If you still need a reliable reader, I’d be happy to step in and provide thorough, honest feedback before your editor’s final pass.
Excited to see the latest chapter! I provide beta reading and manuscript feedback for web novels, happy to give detailed thoughts if you’d like another set of eyes.
February 16, 2026 at 1:22 PM
Excited to see the latest chapter! I provide beta reading and manuscript feedback for web novels, happy to give detailed thoughts if you’d like another set of eyes.
This is so evocative! I love the tension between romance and tragedy here. Is this part of a larger story or a standalone poem? I’d love to read more and give feedback if you’re looking for beta readers
February 16, 2026 at 1:15 PM
This is so evocative! I love the tension between romance and tragedy here. Is this part of a larger story or a standalone poem? I’d love to read more and give feedback if you’re looking for beta readers
Wow, that’s a busy schedule! It sounds like you’ve got a solid pipeline of edits and beta feedback shaping your series. Do you usually bring in beta readers for every book, or just certain drafts? I’d love to know. I enjoy giving detailed feedback and could help make sure Book #2 (or4 )really shines
February 16, 2026 at 1:07 PM
Wow, that’s a busy schedule! It sounds like you’ve got a solid pipeline of edits and beta feedback shaping your series. Do you usually bring in beta readers for every book, or just certain drafts? I’d love to know. I enjoy giving detailed feedback and could help make sure Book #2 (or4 )really shines
Wow, that’s a busy schedule! It sounds like you’ve got a solid pipeline of edits and beta feedback shaping your series. Do you usually bring in beta readers for every book, or just certain drafts? I’d love to know. I enjoy giving detailed feedback and could help make sure Book #2 (or #4 when ready
February 16, 2026 at 1:03 PM
Wow, that’s a busy schedule! It sounds like you’ve got a solid pipeline of edits and beta feedback shaping your series. Do you usually bring in beta readers for every book, or just certain drafts? I’d love to know. I enjoy giving detailed feedback and could help make sure Book #2 (or #4 when ready
Good morning! I’m a professional beta reader and editor who won’t charge anywhere near £5000/hour 😉. I provide thoughtful feedback that helps manuscripts shine. If you’d like, can I DM you for more details?
February 16, 2026 at 12:55 PM
Good morning! I’m a professional beta reader and editor who won’t charge anywhere near £5000/hour 😉. I provide thoughtful feedback that helps manuscripts shine. If you’d like, can I DM you for more details?
I’m happy to help! I can give detailed feedback and fact-check Louis’ reactions so it feels authentic. If you’d like, can DM you to discuss how I can assist?
February 16, 2026 at 10:13 AM
I’m happy to help! I can give detailed feedback and fact-check Louis’ reactions so it feels authentic. If you’d like, can DM you to discuss how I can assist?
That sounds awesome! I’d love to take a look and give you detailed feedback if you’re open to more beta readers. The artwork must add so much to the story.
February 16, 2026 at 10:09 AM
That sounds awesome! I’d love to take a look and give you detailed feedback if you’re open to more beta readers. The artwork must add so much to the story.
Sounds like you’re deep in the trenches! I’d love to give your draft a fresh set of eyes and offer detailed feedback if you’re looking for beta readers. Are you open to having someone take a look before release?
February 16, 2026 at 10:07 AM
Sounds like you’re deep in the trenches! I’d love to give your draft a fresh set of eyes and offer detailed feedback if you’re looking for beta readers. Are you open to having someone take a look before release?
That sounds like such a fun scene , a costume party is the perfect place for that shift from awkward to fully into it 🎭 Music can really unlock a character’s hidden side. I’d love to see how that moment plays out.
February 16, 2026 at 9:58 AM
That sounds like such a fun scene , a costume party is the perfect place for that shift from awkward to fully into it 🎭 Music can really unlock a character’s hidden side. I’d love to see how that moment plays out.
That’s not quirky at all , it’s inspiring. Starting, learning, and creating at any stage of life takes real courage 👏 Your sci-fi journey sounds rich already.
February 16, 2026 at 9:57 AM
That’s not quirky at all , it’s inspiring. Starting, learning, and creating at any stage of life takes real courage 👏 Your sci-fi journey sounds rich already.
That’s an impressive body of work , especially doing it on your own. Finishing a novelette is a big achievement 👏 Which of these projects are you most excited to develop next?
February 16, 2026 at 9:55 AM
That’s an impressive body of work , especially doing it on your own. Finishing a novelette is a big achievement 👏 Which of these projects are you most excited to develop next?
I’d be happy to help as a volunteer . Just checking , is this purely unpaid, or are tips okay if you enjoy the feedback?follow back so i can send a DM to you to discuss more
February 15, 2026 at 10:46 PM
I’d be happy to help as a volunteer . Just checking , is this purely unpaid, or are tips okay if you enjoy the feedback?follow back so i can send a DM to you to discuss more
No worries at all . I’m happy to read as a regular beta reader and share honest feedback. If you find it helpful, a small coffee tip is always appreciated but never expected. What’s your timeline?
February 15, 2026 at 10:33 PM
No worries at all . I’m happy to read as a regular beta reader and share honest feedback. If you find it helpful, a small coffee tip is always appreciated but never expected. What’s your timeline?
Totally understand ,sounds like you’re in good hands . Wishing you smooth edits and a fantastic final result. But, if you want to add to your team, feel free to contact me.
February 15, 2026 at 10:25 PM
Totally understand ,sounds like you’re in good hands . Wishing you smooth edits and a fantastic final result. But, if you want to add to your team, feel free to contact me.