Zid
@zeddybeat.bsky.social
He/him. nerd. Old man phase. Future published Author, in the training arc.
Got no idea what youre talking about with bots, I stick to myself mostly so idk.
You can check my other responses, but basically looking to get general reactions with a focus on the fantasy elements. Ill have a draft you can look at later this month probably if youre interested.
You can check my other responses, but basically looking to get general reactions with a focus on the fantasy elements. Ill have a draft you can look at later this month probably if youre interested.
December 4, 2025 at 4:50 PM
Got no idea what youre talking about with bots, I stick to myself mostly so idk.
You can check my other responses, but basically looking to get general reactions with a focus on the fantasy elements. Ill have a draft you can look at later this month probably if youre interested.
You can check my other responses, but basically looking to get general reactions with a focus on the fantasy elements. Ill have a draft you can look at later this month probably if youre interested.
Id say the main concern is that we arent properly establishing the fantasy elements, and the environment is so fantasy that we are worried about that. We think our character work is great, themes pacing and impact should be satisfying so if they arent somewhere let us know. Ill send when ready, ty!!
December 3, 2025 at 6:38 PM
Id say the main concern is that we arent properly establishing the fantasy elements, and the environment is so fantasy that we are worried about that. We think our character work is great, themes pacing and impact should be satisfying so if they arent somewhere let us know. Ill send when ready, ty!!
Its a blend of romance and mystery with a dash of action. The plot is basically a private eye and his new partner tracking down a stolen item and uncovering the secret to the rotten underbelly of the city. word count is about 23k words.
December 3, 2025 at 12:01 PM
Its a blend of romance and mystery with a dash of action. The plot is basically a private eye and his new partner tracking down a stolen item and uncovering the secret to the rotten underbelly of the city. word count is about 23k words.