Paul
@paulwritespoems.bsky.social
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Poet, Husband, Northumbrian, Sax novice. Pushcart/BOTN nominated Work on BBC & in Dust Poetry, Black Bough, Broken Spine Arts, Starbeck Orion, Eat The Storms Pod, A Thousand Shades Of Green and more #PromoteIndieLit https://paulwritespoems.com
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If you’re working on #WednesdayWIPs this is a potential opportunity for you…
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Thanks Merril. Wanted the reader to leave with a sense of unease 🙏
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Thank you- the words tumbled onto the page on this one 🙏
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This has so many great elements. The open is startling. The end is light. A journey. A rediscovery 👏
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Thanks Karen. Knew the structure, form and subject immediately as soon as prompt was released 🙏
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Ooooffffttt! Powerful and those last few lines! 👏
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Boom! The repetition of tick tock adds so many layers to this too Karen. A really clever piece!
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A sharp incisive piece 👏
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Love the form and language here Dean 👏
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For this week's #PoemsAbout #ImperfectMe, I'm thinking about a small devotion to the unhinged and unhealed parts of ourselves.

Thank you to the host @alanparrywriter.co.uk
and @thebrokenspine.co.uk and to all of the other writers.

#poetry #poem #writing #PoetryCommunity #BlueSkyPoets
a small devotion

sometimes i wonder
what it feels like to be you--

i search the pockets of my mouth,
the hard palate,
the ache that arches me empty.

you aren’t there
in any sheet fold.
when i roll the bed to blindness,
and when i wake--
only a stung tongue,
nightmare dreams of liquid cake,
bird attacks,
red-lacquered fingertips.

all night my eyes pluck out
their own orbit--
broken bulb of you.

every medicine-cabinet morning
needs to catch
the mirror’s mocking gape.
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This is striking. Some expert imagery. That last stanza really drives home the piece 👏👏👏
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A smart piece Carolyn. Pluperfect 👏👏👏
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Had time today to compose something for #poemsabout #ImperfectMe...

A fascinating subject, inspiring so much #poetry, plus introspection, I'm sure.

(Apologies, @alanparrywriter.co.uk Posting a little early - 4 hours before midnight - as tomorrow is busy)

@thebrokenspine.co.uk
FORGERY

Outside, too soft	 like a berry,
easily bruised or pulped underfoot, ultimately 
misshapen and unrecognisable as fruit.

Inside, too much water, rising like a tide,
eyes holding surface tension
inside a quiver-rim of skin.

The wash recedes, leaving hollows 
as it long-trawls dregs
in the comb of emotion, 

and deposits them thick at every shore,

clogging words to soggy syllables.
Waterlogged tissue falls apart.
Becomes throat-mulch.

And when he says you look sad,	and asks why,
you feel sadder, fumbling
for the frayed thread, while

feeling a wet whip flailing you, 
whittling you to the imperfect figure
you have made of yourself.

Helen Laycock
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Excellent- love quiver-rim of skin 🤩👏👏👏
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This is outstanding. Unsettling a bit. Bravo 👏
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Thank you John - it was a great prompt for some oomph. 🙏
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Thank you Carolyn- I wanted the reader to be left with the unease of the narrator 🙏
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That is very kind of you and I’m grateful you enjoyed it 🙏
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Thanks Mike, I’m very happy you picked out knucklefat nose. 🙏
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Thanks Jan, really appreciate it 🙏
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Thank you for your reading and responding 🙏
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Thanks for your reading and analysis Glenn, much appreciated. 🙏
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How is it Friday?!

This week it’s #PoemsAbout #ImperfectMe

This is ‘Sudden Impacts & Ripples’

Will try to catch up through the day and after work.

@alanparrywriter.co.uk @thebrokenspine.co.uk great to see the community growing
Sudden Impacts & Ripples

i punched a mirror once.
watched the glass splinter 
outward 
like quicksilver tremor

there was my true face
a clusterfuck 

abandoned mineshaft eyes 
knucklefat nose 
lips midgrimace / midgrin
receding-tide hairline 

behind flesh was mayhem—
psyche spinning between 
self love  / self loathe 
self doubt / self determination 

impatience is a virtue— 
i ripped face from wall 
abandoned to landfill

replaced it with  
Stepford smile.
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Incredible evening at Write Here, Right Now. A saxophone welcome. A cosmic prompt, celebrations, discussions.

I just want to say thank you to everyone who attends. My writing has improved and pieces worked on in group have given me success. Insight and perspectives are greatly appreciated.

🙏
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Looking forward to tonight’s Write Here, Right Now.

Some much needed time to work on some WiPs!