Xan
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Perpetually tired trans comic artist, making trans comics. Creator of Pandora's Tale and Thinking Too Much to Think Positively. Co-host of the podcast Can't Stop Hibari-kun. https://pandorastale.com/
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Specifically I always wanted a Sailor Moon MMO set in the aftermath of Stars, where Sailor Senshi are being re-established throughout the galaxy. Endless freedom to make your own character, and the various established Senshi show up as mentors
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Pandora's Tale Chapter 3
#10

More new characters! These two ended being pretty popular
PAGE 10
PANEL 1
Exterior shot of O, Fortuna. It is now darker, and people can be seen approaching the building.
PANDORA (OFF)
What do you think?
PANEL 2
PANDORA is wearing her waitress outfit, showing it off for ISABELLE. LYRA is standing beside PANDORA.
LYRA
Oh my gosh, doesn't she look cute?
ISABELLE
It looks great on you!
PANDORA
I'm glad you like it, Mistress!
PANEL 3
PANDORA catches sight of CON and MISS FORTUNA guiding two mysterious figures, HEMMEL and NATALYA, into a back room.
PANDORA
Oh...
PANEL 4
PANDORA and ISABELLE converse discreetly.
PANDORA
Who are those people, Mistress?
ISABELLE
They're from the resistance.
PANEL 5
HEMMEL and NATALYA, casting glances around as they are led to the back.
ISABELLE (OFF)
That's Hemmel. They're the leader of our cell. 
(CONT)
And the tall lady is their second-in-command, Natalya.
PANEL 6
ISABELLE and PANDORA, still talking quietly.
ISABELLE
By the way... Lyra doesn't know we're in the resistance, so try not to mention it around her, okay?
PANDORA
Got it.
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Mostly cutting holes in pants
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Pandora's Tale Chapter 3
#9

Some of the art on this page is rough. I was having a really hard time keeping Miss Fortuna on-model at the time.
PAGE 9
PANEL 1
Closeup of MISS FORTUNA.
MISS FORTUNA
Now, to business.
PANEL 2
ISABELLE stands beside TALLULAH and ZUFOLENE.
MISS FORTUNA (OFF)
Isabelle, I've put you down for the first performance tonight. Tallulah and Zufolene, you're in the late slot.
PANEL 3
MISS FORTUNA speaks, with ZERO standing beside her.
MISS FORTUNA
And...
(CONT)
We're expecting a courier tonight, with an important package for the resistance.
ZERO
Very important.
PANEL 4
Closeup of MISS FORTUNA.
MISS FORTUNA
So let's be vigilant, and keep would-be prying eyes distracted.
ALL (OFF)
Yes, Ma'am!
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I also love Kosaku's "Doki", especially given his tendency to yell it in the anime
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My Japanese brain knows the "ufun" is a little giggle spelled with the alphabet instead of kana, but my English brain can't help but read it as "U fun" like a Prince lyric, especially combined with Hibari's sidelong glance.
Chapter title page from Hibari-kun. Kohsaku is in close up on the right, looking sideways to the left at HIbari, who is similarly looking at Kohsaku. Their names are in English type above their heads, and the SFX on Kohsaku reads DOKI while the one on Hibari says UFUN. The title at the top of the page is 彼女(!?)はおれのものの巻
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Pandora's Tale Chapter 3
#8

Find me a cooler word than "courtesanerie", I'll wait
PAGE 8
PANEL 1
PANDORA being pet by LYRA. MISS FORTUNA speaks.
MISS FORTUNA
Lyra, please find her a uniform.
LYRA
Yes, Ma'am!
PANEL 2
PANDORA and LYRA head out of frame happily. MISS FORTUNA calls after them.
MISS FORTUNA
And make sure it fits! I'm not cutting holes in more than one!
LYRA
How's this? Is this good?
PANDORA
Yessssss, pet meeeee
PANEL 3
ISABELLE, CON, MISS FORTUNA and ZERO. ZERO has her arms folded and looks irritated.
ZERO
We should decide on a cover story for her. People are gonna ask questions if they see a Helper working here.
PANEL 4
ISABELLE and MISS FORTUNA converse.
MISS FORTUNA
We can say that she's a stray.
ISABELLE
A stray?
MISS FORTUNA
It happens. Helpers who are runaways, or abandoned by their owners.
PANEL 5
MISS FORTUNA continues. CON looks thoughtful.
MISS FORTUNA
They were a common sight in Atom City. Back in my courtesanerie days, a number of my colleagues were Helpers.
CON
Huh. I had no idea there were Helpers who aren't... you know... owned.
comicsbyxan.bsky.social
Pandora's Tale Chapter 3
#7

It's Lyra! She's straight, but she's not in-your-face about it
PAGE 7
PANEL 1
Long shot of LYRA, who is wearing the club's cocktail waitress outfit - a fancier, unisex version of a typical bartender outfit.
MISS FORTUNA (OFF)
Lyra! You'll be training Pandora. She's new here.
LYRA
Oh!
PANEL 2
LYRA approaches PANDORA, as MISS FORTUNA watches. LYRA reacts to PANDORA's appearance with excitement.
LYRA
You have kitty ears!
(CONT)
You're so cute I'm gonna die!
PANEL 3
LYRA and PANDORA talk. LYRA is very enthusiastic, PANDORA is happy but a little overwhelmed.
PANDORA
Please don't die!
LYRA
Can I pet you? Do you like being pet?
PANEL 4
Closeup of ISABELLE, behind PANDORA.
ISABELLE
Geez, Lyra. She's not an animal, she doesn't want you petting her. Right, Pandora?
PANEL 5
PANDORA looks up with a very hopeful smile.
PANEL 6
PANDORA in the foreground, giggling happily as LYRA pets her head. ISABELLE looks exasperated.
ISABELLE
I... stand corrected.
PANDORA
Heehee!
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Pandora's Tale Chapter 3
#6

Early on I did toy with the idea of Pandora as a dancer, but once I actually started writing her character, it didn't feel right, my objections being pretty much the same as Isabelle's here. She doesn't quite feel emotionally mature enough.
PAGE 6
PANEL 1
MISS FORTUNA enters the room, holding a cup of coffee.
MISS FORTUNA
Good afternoon, everyone!
ISABELLE (OFF)
Miss Fortuna!
PANEL 2
ISABELLE and PANDORA approach MISS FORTUNA.
ISABELLE
Pandora would like a job!
PANDORA
Yes! I would like a job!
PANEL 3
MISS FORTUNA ponders. ISABELLE reacts with irritation.
MISS FORTUNA
Well... can you dance?
ISABELLE
Not as a dancer. I don't trust the customers to respect her boundaries.
PANEL 4
MISS FORTUNA still pondering. PANDORA responds with enthusiasm.
MISS FORTUNA
Hmm... I suppose we could use another cocktail waitress.
PANDORA
That sounds like something I could do!
PANEL 5
Closeup of MISS FORTUNA looking content.
MISS FORTUNA
Very well, then.
comicsbyxan.bsky.social
Pandora's Tale Chapter 3
#5

A few people really seized upon the idea of Zero secretly being a cavefish. I had a brief obsession with cavefish when I was like 9, so I'm sure my younger self would have been delighted
PAGE 5
PANEL 1
CON approaches ISABELLE and the two converse. In the background, PANDORA stares at an irritated ZERO.
CON
Hey... How's everything going with her?
ISABELLE
Oh, hey, Con. Mostly fine, I guess.
ZERO
What is it?
PANEL 2
Positions as before. PANDORA speaks while ZERO is visibly surprised.
ISABELLE
It's like... sometimes she's really smart, and sometimes it's like I'm talking to a child.
PANDORA
You have eyes!
PANEL 3
As before. ISABELLE looks resigned, CON looks surprised, and ZERO responds angrily.
ISABELLE
And also, last night, she wanted to have sex with me.
CON
Whoa!
ZERO
Of course I have eyes! What do you think I am, some sort of... cavefish?
PANEL 4
As before. ISABELLE shrugs. PANDORA looks confused.
CON
I'd have freaked out.
ISABELLE
It's not her fault. She's just doing what she was trained to do.
PANDORA
Cavefish?
PANEL 5
As before. CON looks a little guilty. ZERO reacts angrily.
CON
I get that... but that mindless devotion, don't you find it kinda creepy?
ZERO
I'm not a cavefish!
PANEL 6
ISABELLE and CON converse. Pandora, now alone, thinks of a cave and a fish in confusion.
ISABELLE
She's trying her best. It's just... gonna take a while.
CON
I guess...
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Pandora's Tale Chapter 3
#4

O, Fortuna is based on a real building in downtown Salt Lake, the former Hotel Plandome on the corner of 400 S and State. In the time that I've lived here, it's been host to a number of unsuccessful businesses. It's currently a taco place, let's wish them luck.
PAGE 4
PANEL 1
Exterior daytime shot of O, Fortuna - a nightclub on a street corner in downtown Pioneer City. This building is part of the old city, an ornate early twentieth century structure.
ISABELLE (OFF)
Do you have any idea how expensive clothes for Helpers are?
PANEL 2
ISABELLE sits at a table in the currently closed nightclub. Beside her are two other dancers, TALLULAH and ZUFOLENE. ISABELLE holds up a tablet for them to see.
ISABELLE
Look at these prices! I almost died!
PANEL 3
ISABELLE looks defeated, while TALLULAH and ZUFOLENE look at the tablet.
TALLULAH
I guess when your market is rich people, you can charge whatever you want.
ISABELLE
I'm gonna be cutting holes in a lot of clothes...
PANEL 4
ISABELLE and ZUFOLENE observe PANDORA interacting with ZERO. PANDORA is now wearing ISABELLE's clothes, with a hole cut in the shorts for her tail. ZERO is dressed as a custodian and is not wearing her goggles.
ZUFOLENE
She's so cute though!
PANDORA
Oh! Ms Zero!
ZERO
Yeah, hi.
comicsbyxan.bsky.social
Pandora's Tale Chapter 3
#3

Having a tail would be awesome but there would be so many logistical problems
PAGE 3
PANEL 1
ISABELLE smiles as she delivers her answer.
ISABELLE
For me... dancing was always my passion. And figuring out my gender stuff definitely helped me to understand what I wanted from life. But honestly, I feel like things really fell into place for me when I joined the resistance.
PANEL 2
ISABELLE gestures emphatically.
ISABELLE
Being a part of something bigger! Taking action to make the world better!
PANEL 3
ISABELLE glances off panel in PANDORA's direction.
PANDORA (OFF)
Mistress, I have a question.
ISABELLE
What is it?
PANEL 4
PANDORA has a pair of shorts pulled most of the way up, but her tail sits above the waistband, preventing her from pulling them up. ISABELLE stares at her in surprise.
PANDORA
What should I do with my tail?
PANEL 5
Positions as before. ISABELLE speaks.
ISABELLE
Right.
PANEL 6
Positions as before.
ISABELLE
You have a tail.
comicsbyxan.bsky.social
I wonder if the solution here is to introduce a trans character who is actually evil
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Pandora's Tale Chapter 3
#2

Of course Pandora wants a collar and of course Isabelle already had one. Such is the wardrobe of a recently out trans woman
PAGE 2
PANEL 1
PANDORA holds a shirt she's taken from the box.
PANDORA
I just mean that I was always told that my purpose was to serve, and now you're my Mistress, but you don't want me to serve you. So... what should I do instead?
PANEL 2
ISABELLE, still seated on the toilet, with a frustrated expression.
ISABELLE
Aw man, I haven't been awake long enough for questions like this.
PANDORA (OFF)
Oh! This is cute!
PANEL 3
PANDORA, now wearing a choker with a heart decoration at the front. She smiles proudly.
PANDORA
Mistress, look!
PANEL 4
ISABELLE regards the happy PANDORA with a resigned expression.
ISABELLE
You found... another collar.
PANDORA
It has a heart on it!
PANEL 5
Closeup of ISABELLE as she ponders the earlier question.
ISABELLE
Well... anyway...
(CONT)
I guess we all have to figure out what we're for. There are humans who spend their whole lives wondering what their purpose is.
PANEL 6
Closeup of PANDORA, who looks thoughtful.
PANDORA
Wow. Being a human is tough.
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Pandora's Tale Chapter 3
#1

Isabelle's reaction here might be my favorite single panel of everything I've done so far
PAGE 1
PANEL 1
A shot of the bedside table in ISABELLE's apartment. PANDORA's Helper Corporation collar and wristband are on the table. The wristband has been cut, and has a pair of scissors beside it.
ISABELLE (OFF)
Okay, here's a bunch of my old clothes.
PANEL 2
PANDORA and ISABELLE in their underwear beside the door to the bathroom, standing over a large box of clothes.
ISABELLE
Most of them will probably be kinda big for you, but there should be something in there that fits.
PANDORA
Ohhh! Thank you, Mistress!
PANEL 3
ISABELLE moves into the bathroom and picks up a razor as PANDORA looks in the box behind her.
ISABELLE
Once we have more money, we can get you some of your own stuff.
PANEL 4
ISABELLE is seated on the toilet, and brings up her leg to start shaving.
PANDORA (OFF)
Mistress?
ISABELLE
Mm-hmm?
PANDORA (OFF)
What am I for?
PANEL 5
ISABELLE paused, as before, with a blank expression.
PANEL 6
Closer shot of ISABELLE as she answers, perplexed.
ISABELLE
Uhm... that's kind of a deep question.
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Pandora's Tale Chapter 3
Cover

Time for chapter three! This is a fun cover. "Cops Can't Read" is the name of a song by the Salt Lake band Fists in the Wind. The fancy R is the symbol of the resistance, and it's based on 🜇, the alchemical symbol for aqua regia, an acid mixture that dissolves gold.
PANDORA'S TALE
Chapter 3: Sisters in Arms, part 1
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Best girl of all time
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Today's Classic Anime Girl is Hibari Oozora, main protagonist of "Stop!! Hibari-kun!!" (1983)!
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Haha, it was frustrating for this element of my dystopian future to just... become super mundane right after I wrote it.

Ah well, just as long as America doesn't slide into a fascist corporatocracy that wants to annex Canada and has militarized cops with zero accountability and infinity money...
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Took me a moment to parse "Kuruaan". That's neat!
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Pandora's Tale Chapter 2
#21

And that's the end of our chapter, and this first story.

My current work on this project has stalled, but I do love these characters.

See you tomorrow for another chapter!
PAGE 21
PANEL 1
Shot of the city.
PANDORA (OFF)
My name is Pandora. It's a name my Mistress gave me.
PANEL 2
Shot of the outside of ISABELLE's apartment.
PANDORA (OFF)
My purpose is to serve my Mistress with dedication and excellence, to obey her orders, anticipate her needs and make her happy. But... she says she doesn't want that.
PANEL 3
Overhead shot of ISABELLE and PANDORA lying on the bed. ISABELLE has her arms wrapped protectively around PANDORA.
PANDORA (OFF)
Everything is different from what I expected. I don't understand who I'm supposed to be here. But I think... I'm happy.
PANEL 4
Closeup of PANDORA, eyes closed, in ISABELLE's embrace. She looks happy and peaceful.
PANDORA (OFF)
I'm not broken.
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Pandora's Tale Chapter 2
#20

This was a difficult scene to get right. The relationship between Pandora and Isabelle is one of the foundations of this story, and I wanted to establish a closeness between them that didn't read like Pandora was being taken advantage of
PAGE 20
PANEL 1
ISABELLE sat next to a sad, confused PANDORA. ISABELLE places a hand on hers.
ISABELLE
Firstly, you're not broken. I want you to stop talking about yourself that way. Okay?
PANDORA
Okay...
PANEL 2
ISABELLE and PANDORA talk. PANDORA looks emphatic.
ISABELLE
Secondly... when people have sex, it should be a choice that both of them make. You have to be able to consent.
PANDORA
But I do consent!
PANEL 3
Closeup of ISABELLE.
ISABELLE
But you're programmed to like me!
(CONT)
Let me put it this way...
(CONT)
If I asked you for sex, and you didn't want to do it... could you refuse?
PANEL 4
Closeup of PANDORA, looking unsure and thoughtful.
PANDORA
I... well...
(CONT)
I'm not sure. I think... it would be very difficult.
PANEL 5
ISABELLE talks to PANDORA, who has turned her head away.
ISABELLE
And that's why we can't do it. I don't ever want to make you do something against your will.
PANDORA
I understand, Mistress.
PANEL 6
PANDORA has tears in her eyes.
PANDORA
I just...
(CONT)
want to be close to you.
PANEL 7
ISABELLE hugs a surprised PANDORA.
PANEL 8
ISABELLE continues to hold PANDORA, who still has tears in her eyes, but looks happier. 
ISABELLE
How's this?
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Pandora's Tale Chapter 2
#19

Huh, I guess the filters were feeling more generous today.

Anyway, yeah. Poor Pandora
PAGE 19
PANEL 1
PANDORA looks at ISABELLE, concerned.
PANDORA
Did I do something wrong, Mistress?
ISABELLE
No! Kinda... not exactly?
(CONT)
We can't do this!
PANEL 2
Closeup of PANDORA, innocently confused.
PANDORA
Sex?
PANEL 3
PANDORA and ISABELLE.
ISABELLE
Sex! That's definitely not a thing you should be doing with me!
PANDORA
But... you got undressed. You took me into your bedroom. In my training, they said that...
PANEL 4
ISABELLE emphatically explaining to PANDORA, who turns away, downhearted.
ISABELLE
I got undressed because I'm going to bed! And... and most of this apartment is bedroom!
PANDORA
Oh...
PANEL 5
Closeup of PANDORA, looking sad.
PANDORA
Is it because I'm broken?
PANEL 6
Closeup of ISABELLE.
ISABELLE
No!
(CONT)
Oh, honey...
comicsbyxan.bsky.social
Pandora's Tale Chapter 2
#18

Last time I uploaded this page it got caught by the auto-mod, so I guess we'll see if Bluesky's filters are still offended by the girlbulge
PAGE 18
PANEL 1
ISABELLE exits the bathroom in her underwear.
ISABELLE
I'm tired...
PANEL 2
ISABELLE sits down on the bed, with PANDORA watching behind her.
ISABELLE
What a day... My back is killing me...
PANEL 3
PANDORA gets closer to ISABELLE, and starts massaging her neck.
ISABELLE
Mmm... that feels good...
PANEL 4
PANDORA leans in and starts kissing ISABELLE's neck. ISABELLE looks suddenly panicked.
PANEL 5
ISABELLE pulls away suddenly from a confused PANDORA.
ISABELLE
Aaaaaaa!
PANEL 6
ISABELLE has backed far away from PANDORA.
ISABELLE
Okay, we need to talk!
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Pandora's Tale Chapter 2
#17

Salt Lake City is surrounded by mountains, and pollution gets trapped in the valley. I figured that as the problem gets worse, rich people will just retreat further and further up the mountains
PAGE 17
PANEL 1
Closer shot of the lights.
ISABELLE (OFF)
Those are on the mountain. You just can't see it in the haze.
PANEL 2
ISABELLE addressing PANDORA, in front of the window.
ISABELLE
That's where the rich people live. The air is better up there.
PANEL 3
ISABELLE seems slightly wistful, while PANDORA watches curiously.
ISABELLE
I guess... that's the kind of place you were supposed to go. Instead of here, in my tiny apartment.
PANEL 4
PANDORA happily clasps ISABELLE's hand.
PANDORA
But I love you, Mistress! I want to be wherever you are!
ISABELLE
Ha... right...