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boutique manga adaptations
project of @shoebill.moe
- high joke density
- occasional accuracy
- unauthorized and just for fun
Discount Sell-Sword Bell by @akitoaihara.bsky.social
Originals posted: x.com/a_akito17/
(2/2)
July 9, 2025 at 4:11 AM
Discount Sell-Sword Bell by @akitoaihara.bsky.social
Originals posted: x.com/a_akito17/
(1/2)
July 9, 2025 at 4:11 AM
For a short project or something with a lot of comedy, I might be a good fit! You can see more of this work posted to this account.
March 23, 2025 at 1:45 AM
Don Dracula
Art + Story by Osamu Tezuka, Dec. 1979
December 25, 2024 at 3:07 PM
Don Dracula
Art + Story by Osamu Tezuka, Dec. 1979
December 17, 2024 at 4:17 PM
Don Dracula
Art + Story by Osamu Tezuka, Dec. 1979
November 3, 2024 at 1:34 PM
Don Dracula
Art + Story by Osamu Tezuka, Dec. 1979
October 31, 2024 at 3:31 PM
Don Dracula
Art + Story by Osamu Tezuka, Dec. 1979
October 31, 2024 at 2:46 PM
Don Dracula
Art + Story by Osamu Tezuka, Dec. 1979
October 31, 2024 at 2:05 PM
Don Dracula
Art + Story by Osamu Tezuka, Dec. 1979
October 31, 2024 at 3:45 AM
Discount Sell-Sword Bell by @akitoaihara.bsky.social
Originals posted: x.com/a_akito17/
October 21, 2024 at 2:50 AM
I think I'll take a short break before picking up my next project, but thanks for coming with me on the journey! Share these pages around, and post your thoughts, please!
October 11, 2024 at 7:05 PM
At the end of the day, I accomplished by goal. I translated a chapter of my favorite comic, honed my lettering skill, and taught myself hiragana. Along the way I did a bunch of research into Journey to the West, the formation of the Japanese language and even cracked a pun that's bugged me for years
October 11, 2024 at 7:03 PM
I don't like how verbose that page ultimately gets. Actually, looking back, I don't like how verbose I ran with a lot of this-- I think I have a strength in hitting each joke hard, but the whole work might suffer from the density. Ah well! It was a good experience all the same!
October 11, 2024 at 7:02 PM
Maybe its the Midwest in me but there's something weird about joke being Bulma yelling "I pissed my pants". So I shift it a little-- Goku, clueless, still doesn't get what the 'little girls room' is, and Bulma, humiliated, gets one last rant to serve as her comeuppance.

I don't know if it works!
October 11, 2024 at 7:01 PM
Goku's final line in Japanese is essentially "Welp! Glad that all worked out!" and Bulma replied "Wahh, I wet 'em!" and I dunno, it doesn't work for me. VIZ changed that to the utterly goofy "All's swell that ends swell!" and "What's swell about peeing yourself!?" which... also, I don't know!
October 11, 2024 at 6:59 PM
Referencing the original Chinese wound up being a blessing. I *loved* that the name has BANG right in there-- its accidentally onomatopoetic, right? When I realized WHIM could contain the "As-You-Wish"ness and WHAM the BANG of it all, it felt fated!
October 11, 2024 at 6:55 PM
You might remember Goku calling it "Power Pole", and the original translation just retains Nyoibo, and adds in a "You remember the tale of the Monkey King and his staff" in the closing narrator's box to tie the reference. But, as always, I wanted something that gets as much across by itself.
October 11, 2024 at 6:50 PM
如意, Ruyi, means "As you wish" or "as desired". Chinese nobles would actually hold a stick called a "Ruyi" when it was their turn to hold the floor in conversation. 棒 is staff, club, etc. Other translations of Journey to the West call the Ruyi Bang the "As-You-Wish Cudgel" or the "Compliant Rod".
October 11, 2024 at 6:48 PM
Final page! There's actually some fun meat to get into here, so this'll be a couple posts.

Goku's staff in Japanese is named Nyoibō. Like Goku himself, its inherited from Journey to the West, where in Chinese it's named 如意金箍棒 - Ruyi Jingu Bang (get the SFX gag?). Nyoibo is a contraction: 如意棒.
Dragon Ball, Chapter 1: "Of Monkey Kings and Underthings"
Art + Story by Akira Toriyama, Dec. 1984

"The End."

That's it! This concludes the first chapter of Dragon Ball! Thanks for reading along!
October 11, 2024 at 6:44 PM
Next page: Extremely straighforward page. I took this into Procreate to remake the speedlines, the only time I used another program besides Photoshop in the production.
Dragon Ball, Chapter 1: "Of Monkey Kings and Underthings"
Art + Story by Akira Toriyama, Dec. 1984

"Almost there--!!"
October 11, 2024 at 6:39 PM