In Episode 308, Geoffrey D. Calhoun and co-host Kristy Leigh Lussier dig into one of the biggest shifts happening in film right now: the rise of YouTubers as box office draws. Using Iron Lung as a case study, they unpack how creator-driven films are outperforming studio releases, why Hollywood is resisting transparency around indie success, and what this power shift means for filmmakers. They also tackle persistent screenwriting myths about page numbers and beat timing, break down writer’s block from a neurological perspective, and have a candid conversation about how AI should and should not be used in the writing process. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - Why YouTubers are now the real box office stars - How Iron Lung succeeded as a low-budget, single-location indie - The truth about page numbers, beat sheets, and rigid structure rules - Why writer’s block is often a physical response, not a creative failure - How AI can support writers without replacing them Key Moments - 00:20 – Seeing Iron Lung and why it works as contained horror - 02:25 – Why studios won’t release indie box office numbers - 04:22 – YouTubers as the new movie stars and marketing engines - 10:16 – The myth of hitting exact beats on exact page numbers - 22:23 – How AI should be used to help writers, not replace them About the Cohost Kristy Leigh Lussier is a filmmaker, producer, and screenwriter working in today’s independent film space. She brings a grounded, real-world perspective to writing craft, production realities, and industry shifts, especially where new media and traditional filmmaking collide. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - Iron Lung - Markiplier - Five Nights at Freddy’s - Snowpiercer - The Guide for Every Screenwriter - Screenplay - Story - The Writer’s Journey Connect with Kristy - Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kantoka127/ - Vertical Drama: https://www.reelshort.com/episodes/episode-1-the-witch-wolf-s-mate-68ed9142610032f6310d58cf-kauyyta9u7?play_time=1 Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website: https://www.thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com - Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod - YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter #ScreenwritingPodcast #IndieFilm #IronLung #YouTubersInFilm #FilmIndustry #WriterLife #ScreenwritingAdvice #Filmmaking

In this episode, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is joined by co-host Kristy Leigh to unpack what Five Nights at Freddy’s 1 & 2 reveal about the current state of Hollywood storytelling. What happens when IP, fan service, and box office data matter more than narrative coherence? Is this the future of studio filmmaking, and if so, where does that leave screenwriters who still care about story? The conversation expands into the larger industry landscape, including Netflix’s dominance, data-driven decision making, the Stranger Things finale controversy, and what writers should realistically prepare for moving forward. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - Why Five Nights at Freddy’s 2 abandons traditional storytelling in favor of fan service - How studios are prioritizing IP and data over narrative cohesion - The difference between box office success and storytelling success - Why the Stranger Things finale struggled and what writers can learn from it - Practical advice for new writers developing loglines and short stories - Where story-driven filmmakers still fit in today’s industry Key Moments - 00:25 – Geoffrey watches Five Nights at Freddy’s and immediately senses something is off - 03:00 – Kristy explains how fan service overtook story in the sequel - 07:00 – Geoffrey breaks down why the sequel has no clear plot or rules - 09:45 – Is Hollywood splitting into data-driven content vs story-driven films? - 15:00 – Why the Stranger Things finale failed structurally - 17:40 – Advice for writers handwriting drafts vs typing - 19:00 – How to turn loglines and short stories into real screenplays About the Guest Kristy Leigh Lussier is a producer, filmmaker, and longtime co-host of The Successful Screenwriter. She brings a grounded, industry-aware perspective to conversations about storytelling, IP adaptations, and the shifting realities of modern filmmaking. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - Five Nights at Freddy’s (Film Franchise) - Netflix industry data and subscriber growth - Stranger Things behind-the-scenes documentary - A24 and Neon as story-first distributors Connect with Kristy - Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kantoka127/ - Vertical Drama: https://www.reelshort.com/episodes/episode-1-the-witch-wolf-s-mate-68ed9142610032f6310d58cf-kauyyta9u7?play_time=1 Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website: https://www.thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com - Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod - YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter #Screenwriting #FilmIndustry #HollywoodTrends #StoryStructure #ScreenwritersLife #PodcastForWriters

In Episode 306, Geoffrey D. Calhoun and Kristy Leigh Lussier kick things off with a passionate recommendation for the absurd, whimsical thriller-comedy Dust Bunny, then pivot into what writers are feeling right now in the marketplace. They talk about how distributors are shifting toward data-driven “checkbox” content, why star power is not the safety net it used to be, and what that means for screenwriters trying to break in consistently. Then they get into some industry tea, including the rumors swirling around Stranger Things Season 5 and AI, and zoom out into a practical craft debate: is a “vomit draft” (or as a listener calls it, “Draft Zero”) actually the best path to finishing scripts and getting to the rewrite where the real work happens. The episode wraps with audience questions about getting a manager and what to do if you can see scenes in your head but struggle to get them onto the page. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - Why finishing a rough first draft is often the fastest path to a strong script - What distributors and streamers want right now, and why it is increasingly data-driven - How to think about concept clarity and producibility without losing your voice - Practical ways to network with managers that do not feel transactional - A simple mindset shift that keeps you from rewriting the first 20 pages forever Key Moments - 00:18 Dust Bunny: why Geoffrey calls it a rare “whimsical absurd” gem - 02:00 Visual subtext and symbolism in Dust Bunny, plus the “unreliable narrator” question - 05:13 AFM market shift: why actor names are not carrying films like they used to - 10:01 Stranger Things Season 5 AI rumors and the spectrum of AI use in writing - 15:45 “Bad advice” spotlight: why the vomit draft (Draft Zero) still matters About the Cohost Kristy Leigh Lussier is Geoffrey’s longtime co-host and a sharp voice on screenwriting craft, industry trends, and the reality of building a writing career one draft at a time. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - Dust Bunny (rented on Amazon Prime) - Brian Fuller (discussion of his work including Pushing Daisies and Hannibal) - Big Eyes (referenced as an example tied to credit and authorship) - Draft Zero (listener Gary Thomas’s preferred term for the “vomit draft”) - Geoffrey’s book: The Guide for Every Screenwriter Connect with Kristy - Instagram:https://www.instagram.com/kantoka127/ - Vertical drama: https://www.reelshort.com/episodes/episode-1-the-witch-wolf-s-mate-68ed9142610032f6310d58cf-kauyyta9u7?play_time=1 Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website:https://www.thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com - Instagram: https://Instagram//www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod - YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #screenwriter #writingcommunity #screenwritingtips #screenwritinglife #filmmaking #filmindustry #writingprocess #firstdraft #rewrite Tags 

In Episode 305 Geoffrey D. Calhoun is joined by Kristy Leigh Lussier for a wide-ranging conversation about storytelling, tone, franchise arcs, and industry realities, and taking a gig you don't love. From horror movies about rabid chimpanzees to why darker sequels often resonate more deeply, this episode blends craft analysis, industry news, and practical screenwriting advice straight from the trenches. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - Why tonal shifts in sequels can strengthen a franchise - What Wicked: Part Two gets right that surprises non-musical fans - The storytelling mistake that doomed the 2011 Conan the Barbarian remake - How long-form character arcs deepen emotional investment - Practical answers to audience screenwriting questions about dialogue, pitching, and career choices Key Moments - 00:00–03:30 – Reviewing Wicked: Part Two and the power of darker second acts - 05:00–07:30 – Franchise arcs and why Harry Potter matures with its audience - 08:20–10:30 – The original vs. remake debate: Conan the Barbarian vs. the 2011 reboot - 10:45–12:30 – Industry Snapshot: MTV officially exits the music-video era - 14:20–18:20 – Listener Q&A: multilingual dialogue and writing outside your favorite genre - 19:30–22:40 – What actually happens after a successful pitch and why lawyers matter About the Guest Kristy Leigh Lussier is a producer, writer, and script consultant known for her sharp story instincts and deep understanding of character-driven storytelling. She brings thoughtful insight into franchise structure, tonal control, and navigating the industry with clarity. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - The Successful Screenwriter Membership (TV pilot course) - Entertainment lawyers and contract basics for writers - Franchise case studies: Harry Potter, Wicked, Conan the Barbarian Connect with Kristy - Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kantoka127/ - Vertical Drama: https://www.reelshort.com/episodes/episode-1-the-witch-wolf-s-mate-68ed9142610032f6310d58cf-kauyyta9u7?play_time=1 Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website: https://www.thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com - Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod - YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #ScreenwritingPodcast #FilmIndustry #StoryStructure #TVWriting #ScreenwriterLife #FilmAnalysis

In Episode 304, Geoffrey D. Calhoun and co-host Kristy Leigh kick off the new year with a wide-ranging conversation about endings, franchises, and the evolving business shaping how stories get made. From reactions to the finale of Stranger Things and Avatar 3, to a deep dive into the Netflix–Warner Bros–Paramount power struggle, this episode explores how data, algorithms, and vertical platforms are redefining opportunities for screenwriters. They also break down bad screenwriting advice, vertical storytelling trends, and what writers should focus on heading into the year ahead. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - Why darker, more definitive endings often resonate more with audiences - How James Cameron writing Avatar 2 and 3 as one script impacted the storytelling - Why the real battle between Netflix, Warner Bros., and Paramount is about data, not just IP - How algorithms are influencing what gets greenlit and how scripts are shaped - Why features, thrillers, and horror still offer strong opportunities for writers - How vertical storytelling is evolving beyond romance into new genres Key Moments - 02:49 – Why Avatar 3 works better than Avatar 2 - 06:46 – The Netflix–Warner Bros–Paramount data war explained - 16:58 – Bad screenwriting advice: “Nothing needs to happen in the first 10 pages” - 19:30 – How to hook readers in the first page, not the first act - 22:22 – How algorithms are already shaping vertical storytelling About the Guest Kristy Leigh Lussier is a writer, producer, and vertical drama creator known for her sharp industry insights and hands-on experience in emerging storytelling platforms. She co-hosts The Successful Screenwriter Podcast and regularly works at the intersection of traditional film, streaming, and vertical content. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter Podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - Underwater - House of Cards - Vertical drama platforms and TikTok mini-series trends Connect with Kristy - Instagram: https://www.spreaker.com - Vertical Drama: https://www.reelshort.com/episodes/episode-1-the-witch-wolf-s-mate-68ed9142610032f6310d58cf-kauyyta9u7?play_time=1 Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website: https://www.thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com - Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod - YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #ScreenwritingPodcast #FilmIndustry #VerticalDrama #IndieFilm #ScreenwritingAdvice #FilmBusiness #Storytelling 

Episode 303 is a packed Q&A with Geoffrey D. Calhoun and co-host Kristy Leigh, kicking off with holiday movie talk, a Star Wars tactical jacket upgrade, and why screenwriting can change how you watch films forever. Then they jump into the real stuff writers are asking right now: how to build characters that feel human, why empathy might be the hidden superpower behind great scripts, how to query smarter, what competitions are actually good for, how to adapt a novel into a screenplay, and what page counts make readers actually want to open your script. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - Why empathy is a major advantage in writing believable characters - How to create stronger characters using simple, practical frameworks - How to query without spraying your script everywhere - When competitions help, and when they are just noise - What page count makes your feature feel “readable” to industry folks Key Moments - 03:19 Does screenwriting “ruin” movies or deepen your appreciation? - 10:07 Geoffrey’s worst script read and why empathy matters on the page - 17:50 Building great characters - 26:41 Competitions: what they are good for, what to avoid, and why research matters - 29:42 Novel to screenplay: streamline Plot A, combine characters, and write efficiently - 36:24 Feature page count: what feels professional and what gets ignored About the Cohost: Kristy Leigh is Geoffrey’s co-host and a performer with a sharp eye for story, structure, and what makes characters pop on screen. She brings a grounded industry perspective, plus the actor’s lens on why certain writing choices work. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - The Guide for Every Screenwriter (Geoffrey’s book) - WriterDuet (screenwriting software) - InkTip Script Leads (Geoffrey shares free vetted leads) - “Sinopedia” (Kristy’s horror script breakdown book recommendation) - Films and shows discussed: Christmas Vacation, Die Hard 2, Die Hard 3, The Office, Avatar: The Way of Water, upcoming Avatar 3 - Enjoyable writing picks: DogMan (Luc Besson), Sinners Connect with Kristy - Instagram: https://www.spreaker.com - Kristy’s vertical drama: https://www.reelshort.com/episodes/episode-1-the-witch-wolf-s-mate-68ed9142610032f6310d58cf-kauyyta9u7?play_time=1 Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website:https://www.thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com - Instagram: https://www.spreaker.com - YouTube: https://www.spreaker.com #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #Screenwriting #ScreenwritingTips #Screenwriter #WritingCommunity #IndieFilm #Filmmaking #QueryLetters #ScreenplayStructure #CharacterDevelopment

In Episode 302, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is joined once again by Kristy Leigh Lussier for a wide-ranging, candid conversation that blends film breakdowns, screenwriting craft, and real-world industry advice. The duo digs into why Sisu: Road to Revenge works as a sequel, how emotional stakes elevate spectacle, and what filmmakers can learn from restraint. They also explore the surprising power of HBO’s Welcome to Derry, including why sometimes a story should end exactly where it does. From there, the conversation shifts into the realities of modern screenwriting, including the rise of “tell-don’t-show” storytelling for second-screen audiences, what that means for craft, and how writers can adapt without losing their voice. The episode wraps with practical career advice for emerging writers, a hard truth about querying too early, and a holiday debate that refuses to die: is Die Hard actually a Christmas movie? What You’ll Learn in This Episode - Why Sisu 2 succeeds by keeping its original formula intact - How emotional stakes matter more than scale in sequels - The risks of overtelling stories for second-screen audiences - When “tell-don’t-show” notes appear and how to handle them professionally - Whether characters must always change to have a strong arc - Why sending scripts too early can hurt your career - How to protect yourself from common industry scams Key Moments - 00:42 – Why Sisu: Road to Revenge feels like “Norwegian Fury Road” - 03:00 – Emotional stakes and weaponizing personal loss in sequels - 05:11 – Why Welcome to Derry delivers rare emotional closure - 09:39 – Is “tell-don’t-show” becoming the new normal? - 18:26 – Do characters have to change? The Big Lebowski debate - 22:27 – Why writers should not send scripts too early - 27:35 – Die Hard debate officially begins About the Guest host Kristy Leigh Lussier is a filmmaker, producer, and longtime co-host of The Successful Screenwriter Podcast. Known for her honest industry insight and sharp storytelling instincts, Kristy brings a grounded, practical perspective to conversations about craft, career, and the realities of working in film and television. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - Sisu: Road to Revenge - Welcome to Derry - The Big Lebowski - Young Adult - Die Hard Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website: - Instagram: - YouTube: #ScreenwritingPodcast #ScreenwritingAdvice #FilmIndustry #WritingCommunity #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #StoryStructure #ScreenwritingTips 

In this solo episode of The Successful Screenwriter, Geoffrey D. Calhoun breaks down the shocking acquisition bids involving Netflix, Warner Bros., and Paramount and explains what they actually mean for working screenwriters. With co-host Kristy Leigh Lussier sidelined by COVID, Geoffrey steps in to unpack the real industry impact behind the headlines, from shrinking theatrical windows and mid-budget film erosion to foreign investment, media consolidation, and soft power. Most importantly, Geoffrey offers clarity, perspective, and practical guidance on how writers can still build careers, get projects made, and create opportunity in a rapidly shifting entertainment landscape. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - Why Netflix’s business model puts mid-budget films at risk - What Paramount’s bid could mean for theatrical releases and media control - How monopolization affects writers, creators, and audiences - Where writers can realistically get work made right now - Why chasing gigs is less effective than building IP - Whether moving to LA still makes sense in today’s industry - How to choose the right idea when none of them feel ready Key Moments - 00:00 Industry update and why this episode could not wait - 06:30 Netflix’s $80B bid and the future of theatrical releases - 15:20 Paramount’s $108B offer, foreign money, and CNN influence - 27:45 Why Netflix wins regardless of who acquires Warner Bros - 36:10 What writers should do now to survive and thrive - 48:30 Choosing the idea that is worth writing About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - Weekly free screenwriting leads at https://www.thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website: https://www.thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com - Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod - YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter #Screenwriting #FilmIndustry #HollywoodBusiness #Netflix #WarnerBros #Paramount #ScreenwritersLife #FilmCareers #StreamingWars #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter 

We are celebrating our big 300th episode with in depth craft talk and our giveaway.  Kristy breaks down seeing Five Nights at Freddy’s 2 in a packed theater, what real fan service looks like, and why understanding the assignment with IP can matter more than chasing four quadrant appeal. Geoffrey shares his hot take on Wicked For Good and why character motivation has to make emotional sense or the whole story starts to wobble.  We talk about Netflix buying Warner Bros, what consolidation could mean for theaters and for working writers, and why packed screenings still matter. From there we dig into real listener questions, including what to do when your second act is boring in a contained script, how subplots keep a story alive, why cutting to the antagonist is a secret weapon, and why you should master features before jumping into pilots and series. If you are stuck in act two, worried your work is not ready, or wondering how to get your script seen when you feel like you live in the middle of nowhere, this milestone episode is for you.  What You’ll Learn in This Episode - How to tell if your script is truly ready to be “out there” - Practical ways to fix a boring second act in a contained story - Why subplots and antagonists keep your pages from going flat - The real difference between features and pilots, and why that matters - What fandom driven hits like Five Nights at Freddy’s 2 can teach you about IP and audience Key Moments - 00:20 – Celebrating episode 300 and announcing the big giveaway prizes - 01:12 – Kristy’s breakdown of Five Nights at Freddy’s 2 and writing for fandoms - 06:45 – Geoffrey’s Wicked 2 hot take, grief, and the missed John Wick moment - 12:17 – Netflix buying Warner Bros, what this means for theaters and writers - 23:42 – Listener question, how to fix a boring second act in a limited setting About the CoHost Kristy Leigh is a writer, director, and co host of the show. She works in film and television, writes and directs vertical drama such as The Witch Wolf’s Mate for ReelShort, and helps writers level up their scripts through feedback and development. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. His mission is to inspire and empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - The Guide For Every Screenwriter - Five Nights at Freddy’s 2 - Wicked For Good - InkTip - ScreenX and 4D style theatrical screenings Connect with Guest - Kristy on Instagram:https://www.instagram.com/kantoka127/ - Kristy’s vertical drama https://www.reelshort.com/episodes/episode-1-the-witch-wolf-s-mate-68ed9142610032f6310d58cf-kauyyta9u7?play_time=1 Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website: https://www.thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com - Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod - YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter #ScreenwritingPodcast #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #ScreenwritingTips #SecondActProblems #BadScreenwritingAdvice #KristyLeigh #VirtualGeoffrey #InkTip #FiveNightsAtFreddys #WickedMovie

In this episode, filmmaker Jesse McAnally joins Geoffrey to break down the real process of making an indie feature from scratch. Jesse shares how he developed The Daughters of the Domino, ran a successful Kickstarter, storyboarded every shot in Cine Tracer, and navigated the unexpected challenges that hit indie sets. From on-the-fly rewrites to managing clashing personalities, Jesse opens up about the realities most filmmakers never talk about. If you’re building your own film or planning to, this one is loaded with practical insight and encouragement. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - How to develop a feature from a childhood concept - Smarter ways to run a Kickstarter without drowning in giveaways - Why pre-visualization can save your production - How to adjust performances and scenes in real time - The truth about set conflicts and managing morale - Why your film is your calling card - The power of collaboration and treating people well Key Moments 00:20 Jesse explains the origin of The Daughters of the Domino 02:50 How he structured a stress-free Kickstarter with digital perks 05:40 Storyboarding every shot using Cine Tracer 07:00 The first-day disaster and managing crew expectations 10:26 On-set rewrites after discovering new opportunities in performance About the Guest Jesse McAnally is a filmmaker whose latest feature, The Daughters of the Domino, blends mystery, character-driven storytelling, and sharp visual planning. His work has screened at festivals across the country and continues to draw attention for its craft and originality. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in This Episode - The Daughters of the Domino film info and festival updates - Cine Tracer (previz/storyboarding tool) Connect with Guest Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/jessemcanally Website: https://www.jessemcanally.com Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: https://www.thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #indiefilm #podcast #thesuccessfulscreenwriter #kickstarterfilm #storydevelopment

Geoffrey and Kristy tackle some of the worst “rules” floating around screenwriting circles. They break down why advice like “the audience must always be ahead of your characters” or “every line of dialogue needs action underneath it” can actually limit your voice and make your script feel stiff. They dig into Predator: Badlands, Prey, and the new Deathstalker, talk about empathy for monsters, building lore that feels lived in, and how theme and character relationships elevate genre. Then they answer questions on action description, page density, and when it actually makes sense to bend or break format. If you’ve ever felt boxed in by conflicting advice, this episode clears the fog and shows you how to keep scripts clean and professional without losing your style. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - Why some “never do this” rules are just personal preferences - How to choose whether the audience is ahead of, equal to, or behind your characters - When dialogue stands fine on its own - How to keep action lines tight while still revealing character - How to bend format without looking sloppy Key Moments 00:20 300th episode giveaway teaser 00:57 Predator: Badlands, empathy for a Predator, and theme talk 08:30 Breaking down the “audience must be ahead” myth 11:59 Why dialogue doesn’t always need action underneath 20:48 When breaking format is smart instead of sloppy About the Guest Kristy Leigh Lussier is a screenwriter, director, and producer focused on character driven storytelling. She brings a director’s eye to structure, performance, and theme, and she joins Geoffrey in the weekly livestreams to help writers level up their craft. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a mentor dedicated to helping writers grow. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to support filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode Predator: Badlands Prey Deathstalker Pearl Harbor (screenplay example) Star Wars Episode III fight scene Connect with Kristy Kristy on Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kantoka127/ Kristy’s vertical drama: https://www.reelshort.com/episodes/episode-1-the-witch-wolf-s-mate-68ed9142610032f6310d58cf-kauyyta9u7?play_time=1 Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: https://www.thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram:https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter If this episode helped you rethink some of the “rules,” subscribe, leave a quick review, and share it with a writer who needs to hear it. Screenshot this episode, tag @screenwriterpod, and tell us one writing “rule” you’re ready to let go of. And keep an eye on Instagram for the 300th episode giveaway. #screenwriting #screenwritingpodcast #screenwritingtips #amwriting #scriptnotes #indiefilm #PredatorBadlands #Deathstalker #writingadvice

In episode 297, Geoffrey and Kristy go live to talk remakes, theme, and the realities of writing inside a studio system. They compare the new Running Man to the Arnold classic, explore why Predator: Badlands feels like a surprise standout, and break down Guillermo del Toro’s Frankenstein as a case study in subtlety and adaptation. They also answer live viewer questions about originality in Hollywood, story structure, outlining, and how to keep writing from getting overcomplicated. Geoffrey shares two new Script Leads and previews the big 300th episode giveaway, What You’ll Learn in This Episode - How to weave theme into your story without stating it out loud - Why del Toro’s Frankenstein hits key book elements and where it still sidesteps the core nature vs nurture idea - The difference between three act and five act structure, and how to spot it while watching - How studio pressures shape “originality” in modern films - A mind map technique to create new story ideas fast Key Moments - 00:37 Talking the 300th episode giveaway and Virtual Geoffrey - 01:38 Breaking down the new Running Man vs the 1987 original - 06:49 Why Predator: Badlands works and Dan Trachtenberg’s direction for the franchise - 09:03 Debunking the bad advice that writers must state the theme directly - 17:27 Why del Toro’s Frankenstein is the closest yet to the novel, and where the adaptation shifts focus About the Guest Kristy Leigh Lussier is a screenwriter, producer, actress, and story analyst with a background in development and script evaluation. She champions character driven genre projects, has produced and contributed to numerous independent shorts and features, and mentors emerging writers in the craft and business of screenwriting. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in This Episode - The Running Man (1987) - The new Running Man - Guillermo del Toro’s Frankenstein - Script Leads blog on TheSuccessfulScreenwriter.com Connect with Guest: Kristy Leigh Lussier - Instagram: https://www.spreaker.com - Vertical dramahttps://www.reelshort.com/episodes/episode-1-the-witch-wolf-s-mate-68ed9142610032f6310d58cf-kauyyta9u7?play_time=1 Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website: https://www.thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com - Instagram: https://www.spreaker.com - YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter Share the episode, leave a rating, and send in your questions for next week’s live Q&A. #Screenwriting #ScreenwritingPodcast #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #WritingTheme #Frankenstein #RunningMan #Predator #ScriptLeads #WriteBetterScripts

Geoffrey D. Calhoun and Kristy Leigh Lussier dive into horror films, story rules, and the art of breaking them the right way. From Geoffrey’s emotional reaction to Good Boy to their debate on flashbacks and narrative discipline, this episode is packed with insights for any writer exploring tension, fear, and structure. Plus, they brainstorm ideas for the upcoming 300th episode giveaway and talk about the films every horror fan should see. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - How to break story rules the right way - The importance of structure and consistency in screenwriting - How to use flashbacks effectively (and when they hurt your story) - Writing fear through tension, atmosphere, and primal emotion - What today’s horror films can teach about character and storytelling Key Moments - 00:22 Brainstorming ideas for the 300th episode celebration - 01:03 Geoffrey’s emotional reaction to Good Boy and dog-POV storytelling - 08:37 The Woman in the Yard and the danger of breaking story rules - 11:24 Trash Screenwriting Advice: “Just break the rules” - 19:28 Flashbacks and how to use them effectively About the Guest Kristy Leigh Lussier is a filmmaker, writer, and producer with a passion for genre storytelling. She brings a sharp industry perspective and a love of horror to the conversation. - Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kantoka127/ - Watch her series The Witch Wolf’s Mate: https://www.reelshort.com/episodes/episode-1-the-witch-wolf-s-mate-68ed9142610032f6310d58cf-kauyyta9u7?play_time=1 About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - The Guide For Every Screenwriter - Good Boy - We Are Zombies - Turbo Kid - Terrifier series - The Woman in the Yard - Halloween (1978) - The Conjuring - The Exorcist - Session 9 Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website: https://thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com/ - Instagram:https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod - YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter We’re only four episodes away from 300! Have an idea for our big celebration or giveaway? Send it in and don’t forget to share your screenwriting questions for next week’s show. #Screenwriting #WritingTips #Filmmaking #HorrorWriting #Podcast

Director Anu Valia joins Geoffrey to unpack the craft behind her feature We Strangers. We dig into keeping your voice while working in TV, building an indie over years, collaborating with actors who elevate subtext, and weaving race, class, and power into story without preaching. If you’re balancing paid gigs with personal work and wondering how to protect your vision, this one’s for you. If you enjoyed this episode, please follow, rate, and share it with a writer friend. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - How to keep your creative voice while directing for television - A practical path from idea to finished indie feature - Casting strategies that unlock subtext and performance - Directing actors with clear, specific adjustments - Writing themes of race, class, and power with nuance Key Moments - 00:23 Welcome and credits that shaped Anu’s eye - 01:35 The journey of We Strangers and VOD access - 04:54 The premise, subtext, and why the “tiny lie” works - 06:58 Code switching, identity, and carrying the creative backpack - 16:08 Why “great directing is casting” and working the scene About the Guest Anu Valia is a writer-director known for character-driven stories across film and television, including episodes of acclaimed series and the feature We Strangers. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - We Strangers - She-Hulk: Attorney at Law - Shrinking - And Just Like That… Connect with Guest - Learn more about We Strangers on VOD platforms Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website: https://thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com/ - Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod - YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #directing #indiefilm #acting #casting #WeStrangers #AnuValia #TVdirector #storycraft

Tommy Cresta from The Popcorn Podcast joins Geoffrey to talk about moving from reviewing movies to writing them. They dig into shopping a home-invasion feature called Trespass, ways to get eyes on your script, and the messy middle of creative burnout. The conversation also gets real about men’s mental health, eating disorders, and building support systems that keep you writing. Stick around for Alien and Predator franchise hot takes plus a peek at Tommy’s found-footage project and gaming content. If you are having thoughts of suicide or are in emotional distress, you are not alone. Call or text 988 in the U.S. to reach the Suicide and Crisis Lifeline for free, 24/7 confidential support. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - Practical ways to shop a first feature script without gatekeepers - How contests, listings, and “script for sale” pages can build momentum - Managing burnout, depression, and isolation as a writer - Why community matters and how to find your tribe - Franchise talk: Alien, Predator, and what’s worth studying as a writer Key Moments - 00:22 Welcome and the story behind Trespass - 02:19 From podcasting to screenwriting and finding purpose through writing - 06:38 Hitting rock bottom, NYU film training, and family support - 10:33 Men’s mental health, suicidal ideation, and reaching out for help - 16:14 A lighter turn: Alien, Predator, and finding inspiration in fandom About the Guest Tommy Cresta is one half of The Popcorn Podcast. He reviews films, creates gaming content, and is shopping the home-invasion feature Trespass. He’s also developing a winter found-footage horror project and documenting a ghost investigation for his channel. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - Trespass (feature script) and the strategy of listing scripts for purchase - 13Horror contest model for script visibility - Alien: Romulus - The Rookie (ABC) - Hulu’s animated Predator film - NYU filmmaking program (as a career reset and skills boost) - Suicide & Crisis Lifeline: Call or text 988 (U.S.) Connect with Guest - The Popcorn Podcast — YouTube and Spotify - Instagram: search “The Popcorn Podcast Tommy Cresta” - Gaming and horror content on the same channel Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website:https://thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com/ - Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod - YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter  #screenwriting #mentalhealth #suicideprevention #indiefilm #screenwriterpodcast #horror #Alien #Predator

Screenwriting legend Paul Chitlik joins Geoffrey to reveal why so many screenwriters struggle to break through and how to finally rise above the noise. They discuss the biggest mistakes writers make, why rewriting is the key to success, and how to craft stories and characters that truly stand out in today’s industry. Paul also shares insights from his new book, The Screenwriting Sensei, and how embracing structure (and knowing when to break it) can take your writing to the next level. What You’ll Learn in This Episode: - Why “good” scripts still get ignored in Hollywood - The secret to developing characters readers actually remember - How to master structure—then break it the right way - What today’s changing film industry means for screenwriters - Why rewriting 20+ times might be your key to success Key Moments: - (00:35) The origins of The Screenwriting Sensei - (04:00) Why the business keeps changing but story doesn’t - (06:16) What makes a story truly work - (10:22) How to use (and break) traditional structure - (16:25) The truth about rewrites and patience in screenwriting About the Guest: Paul Chitlik is an award-winning screenwriter, author, and educator with decades of experience writing for film and television. His new book, The Screenwriting Sensei: A Complete Guide to Writing Your First Script, offers writers practical lessons and exercises to master the craft from page one. About the Host: With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode: - The Screenwriting Sensei by Paul Chitlik — Available on Amazon, Barnes & Noble, and MWP.com (25% discount at MWP) - The Guide for Every Screenwriter by Geoffrey D. Calhoun Connect with Guest: Website: Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun: - Website: https://thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com/ - Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod - YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter #ScreenwritingPodcast #ScreenwritingTips #ScreenwritingPainPoints #ScreenwriterAdvice #TheScreenwritingSensei #PaulChitlik #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter 

What happens when you’ve done everything right. Made a film, landed a rep, and still find yourself stuck? In this episode, Geoffrey and Kristy tackle the tough truth about stalled careers and how rebranding or shifting genres can reignite momentum. They also dive into Steven Soderbergh’s Presence, breaking down why its bold POV and long oners captivate audiences, and chat about Jonathan Nolan’s Fallout heading to New Vegas for Season 2. Plus, Kristy shares insights from her new vertical series The Witch Wolf’s Mate and why short-form storytelling is becoming a massive opportunity for indie filmmakers. Spoiler alert: We discuss key plot details from Presence. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - Why even successful screenwriters and filmmakers hit career stalls - How to rebrand or change genres strategically to stay relevant - What makes Presence a masterclass in single-location storytelling - Why vertical short-form filmmaking is the next indie wave - Where to get free, verified weekly script leads from producers Key Moments - 00:23 First reactions to Presence and its surprising twist - 07:30 The craft behind Soderbergh’s long takes and single-location setup - 09:06 What to do when your screenwriting career stalls - 15:08 Fallout Season 2 moves to New Vegas — what that means for writers - 18:11 Kristy’s new vertical drama The Witch Wolf’s Mate and how RealShort changes the game About the Guest Kristy Leigh is a filmmaker and producer specializing in audience-friendly genre storytelling and emerging formats, including vertical dramas. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - Presence (dir. Steven Soderbergh; written by David Koepp) - Fallout (Amazon) – Season 2 moving to New Vegas - RealShort App – Watch The Witch Wolf’s Mate - Script Leads by Geoffrey D. Calhoun – Free, verified weekly leads Connect with Kristy Leigh - 📸 https://www.instagram.com/kantoka127/ - 🎬 https://www.reelshort.com/episodes/episode-1-the-witch-wolf-s-mate-68ed9142610032f6310d58cf-kauyyta9u7?play_time=1 Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - 🌐 https://thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com/ - 📸 https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod - ▶️ https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter 🎬 https://thesuccessfulscreenwriter.aweb.page/p/fc9d2bc4-9176-499e-8f59-5d3335ea791f?fbclid=PAZXh0bgNhZW0CMTEAAadlPzJbP0uPfCDBAcvM3ayhgLKxvH-olZWPzK5-ZiB2p1qe1BEAB0_xQpwAbA_aem_SXvELLCRzge8AFd2L3YCxg — be the first to know which producers are requesting scripts and accepting submissions. Got a screenwriting question or challenge you want featured on the show? Drop it in the comments or message Geoffrey on Instagram. #Screenwriting #Filmmaking #CareerAdvice #Soderbergh #Presence #Fallout #RealShort #ScriptLeads #IndieFilm #WritingCommunity

We’re closing in on 300 episodes and celebrating with a lively live stream. Geoffrey and Kristy dig into the gloriously bonkers Toxic Avenger remake and share why Tron Ares is better than the early negativity suggests.Then we tackle your questions on query letters, page counts that actually get read, whether you must live in LA to make it, and how specialists like medical doctors can break into writing. We wrap with a frank look at the industry slowdown and practical ways to build momentum locally. Like, comment, and drop your questions for next week’s live Q&A. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - How to write query emails that producers actually read - Page count targets that help your script get a yes - Why you do not need to live in LA to build a screenwriting career - Practical entry points for experts outside film, like physicians, to contribute to shows - A real talk snapshot of the current market and how to keep moving locally Key Moments - 00:23 Welcome and the road to 300 episodes - 01:33 Toxic Avenger remake review and why it works - 03:49 Tron Ares thoughts, redemption arc, and theme of loss - 09:36 Trash screenwriting advice we are tossing out today - 18:03 Q&A lightning round: queries, page counts, LA myth, doctor-to-writer path, and market reality About the Guest Kristy Leigh is Geoffrey’s on-air partner for our weekly live Q&A. She brings producer insight, story instincts, and a sharp eye for what works on the page and on set. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - The Toxic Avenger (remake) - Tron Ares - We Have Always Lived in the Castle - Presence - Good Boy - Sisu and the upcoming sequel - The Guide for Every Screenwriter by Geoffrey D. Calhoun Connect with Guest Send questions for Kristy during our weekly live Q&A via Geoffrey’s Instagram below. - Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website: https://thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com/ - Instagram: @screenwriterpod - YouTube: The Successful Screenwriter Enjoyed the episode? Like, subscribe, and leave a comment with your question for next week’s live Q&A. Want hands-on help with your script? Join our community and get support from Geoffrey and friends. #Screenwriting #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #QueryLetter #IndieFilm #WritingTips #ToxicAvenger #TronAres #Presence #GoodBoy #Sisu #LiveQandA #FilmIndustry #ScriptNotes

Director Ben Semanoff returns to break down Netflix’s Black Rabbit. We talk about joining a show with a strong tone, how each directing block gently “pushes the circle,” and why the aesthetic grows more unhinged as the brothers’ lives unravel. Ben shares set stories, including the infamous burning bowling ball, the attic scene that runs seven to eight minutes, and how the production design turned New York into a character. We also cover collaborating with writer-producers, directing a director, and shaping visual language that shifts from disciplined to unstable as the story escalates. - What You’ll Learn in This Episode - How to enter an established series, honor the tone, and still add your voice - Practical ways to build a visual progression that mirrors character descent - The reality of “tone meetings” and being prepared for on-set challenges - Collaborating with writer-producers to protect story intent while solving production problems - Production design as backstory and how it supports performance and blocking - Key Moments - 03:18 — On-set surprises and the burning bowling ball story - 07:57 — Directing a director: working with Jason Bateman - 12:47 — Minimal VFX, real locations, and a love letter to New York - 14:25 — Building the Black Rabbit interior and designing history into sets - 20:37 — Using visual style to reflect the brothers’ shifting dynamic About the Guest Ben Semanoff is a director and cinematographer known for Ozark and The Night Of. On Black Rabbit he directed episodes that push the show’s aesthetic as the story darkens, drawing on a background in precise, deliberate camerawork while embracing a more unstable, naturalistic feel. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. - Resources Mentioned in the Episode - Black Rabbit (Netflix) - Ozark - The Night Of - Ripley - Uncut Gems Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website: TheSuccessfulScreenwriter.com - Instagram: @screenwriterpod - YouTube: The Successful Screenwriter Enjoyed the episode? Leave a rating on your favorite podcast app, drop a comment with your favorite insight from Ben, and share this with a filmmaker who loves grounded crime drama.  #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #Screenwriting #Filmmaking #TVDirecting #BlackRabbit #JasonBateman #JudeLaw #SetLife #ProductionDesign #DirectingCraft

In this live Q&A, Geoffrey D. Calhoun and co-host Kristy Leigh unpack M3GAN 2.0’s genre swerve from horror comedy to horror action, why Terminator 2 may have been the template, and how fast turnarounds can flatten story. Then they dive into Tilly Norwood and the rise of AI performers, what that could cost the industry in craft and jobs, and why strong scripts matter even more. Geoffrey closes with his “trash screenwriting advice” takedown of the luck in the industry and explains the Three Ts that actually move careers. Listener Q&A covers writing pages without knowing the full story, plotting vs pantsing, and the raw emotions that tell you a scene is working. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - How a sequel’s genre shift can alienate core fans - Why speed-to-market can warp tone and structure - The real implications of AI performers for actors and writers - Why stronger scripts become critical in an AI pipeline - The Three Ts framework for breaking in without “luck” - Plotter vs pantser: when each approach helps - Emotional checkpoints that signal your scene is landing Key Moments - 01:22 First take on M3GAN 2.0 and the head-punch opener - 05:31 Home Alone-style hijinks and tonal whiplash - 08:08 Tilly Norwood and the AI performer debate - 11:13 Prediction: indie and international adoption first - 17:55 Bad screenwriting tip: “You need luck” - 21:09 Q&A: writing pages without the full story - 25:14 Killing characters and arguing with your draft About the Guest Kristy Leigh is a writer and producer who champions story craft, performance, and indie filmmaking communities, most recently at the Boise Film Festival. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - M3GAN 2.0 - Terminator 2: Judgment Day - The Conjuring series - Charlie and the Chocolate Factory (2005) and John August - Boise Film Festival - Tilly Norwood (AI performer) - Finding Nicole Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website: TheSuccessfulScreenwriter.com - Instagram: @screenwriterpod - YouTube: The Successful Screenwriter Have a screenwriting question for the next live show? Drop it in the comments, and tune in next week. If today’s chat helped, share the episode with a writer friend. #Screenwriting #ScreenwriterPodcast #M3GAN2 #AIinFilm #WritingProcess #ThreeTs #IndieFilm #BoiseFilmFestival #PlotterVsPantser #HorrorWriting

Geoffrey and Kristy kick off with the 80s classic Monster Squad, then break down a great subtext moment from the new F1 film. They unpack “on-the-nose” dialogue vs character voice, when to cut redundancy, and how to spot predatory “producer” offers. Listener Q&A covers why watching movies improves your craft and whether short action lines beat long descriptive blocks. What You’ll Learn in This Episode • How to spot and write effective subtext in quiet scenes • A quick gut-check to avoid on-the-nose dialogue • When longer action lines help vs hurt • Red flags for scammy “producers” and safer platforms to consider • A simple note-taking method to level up how you watch films Key Moments 00:23 Welcome with Kristy 01:04 Why Monster Squad still lands 03:46 F1 takeaways and a subtext masterclass 07:31 On-the-nose dialogue and finding voice 12:53 The 50 percent “producer” red flag 15:47 Vetting platforms and why Geoffrey trusts InkTip 20:19 Q&A Watching movies to get better 24:14 Q&A Short vs long action lines 29:04 Wins of the week and encouragement About the Guest Kristy Leigh Lussier is a screenwriter and producer with a background in development and story evaluation. She champions character-driven genre projects and mentors emerging writers. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned • The Monster Squad 1987 • The Lost Boys 1987 • Shane Black scripts for voice study • F1 film as a subtext case study • InkTip • Coverfly mention and why vetting matters • The Guide for Every Screenwriter Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website https://thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com/ Instagram @screenwriterpod YouTube The Successful Screenwriter Enjoyed the show? Share with a writer friend, and drop questions for our next live Q&A. #Screenwriting #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #AmWriting #FilmCommunity #IndieFilm #ScriptNotes #WritingTips #Dialogue #Subtext #Storytelling #WritersLife #MonsterSquad #ShaneBlack #LostBoys #MovieChat #FilmDiscussion #WritingCommunity #ScriptAdvice #OnTheNoseDialogue #ProtectYourWork

Geoffrey is joined by Kristy Leigh for a special live taping of Episode 287. They dive into the unique narrative style of Weapons, compare it with Barbarian, break down the shocking twists of 28 Years Later, and share some truly questionable “screenwriting advice” floating around the industry. Plus: a discussion on the new concept of the thumbnail pitch What You’ll Learn in This Episode - How shifting POV can change the audience’s entire experience (Weapons) - Why themes of grief, tragedy, and perspective make stories resonate - The shocking ending of 28 Years Later and what it sets up next - Why “don’t write kids or animals” is terrible advice for screenwriters - How many drafts (or passes) pros go through before submitting scripts - What a “thumbnail pitch” is and why it matters for writers today Key Moments - 00:00 – Live intro with Geoffrey & Kristy - 00:40 – Breaking down Weapons and its Rashomon-style POV shifts - 06:58 – The creepy aunt character and her layered origins - 11:59 – Reviewing 28 Years Later and its shocking final minutes - 16:15 – Thematic takeaways: humanity, death, and survival - 17:58 – Trash screenwriting tip: “Don’t write kids or animals” - 22:03 – Writing with (or without) passion vs. writing to sell - 23:29 – Industry chat: the rise of the “thumbnail pitch” - 26:43 – How many drafts is enough? Geoffrey & Kristy share numbers - 29:12 – Geoffrey’s red carpet story and calling out a one-draft film - 30:26 – Live Q&A wrap-up About the Guest: Kristy Leigh is a filmmaker and recurring guest of The Successful Screenwriter. She brings a producer’s eye to storytelling, offering practical insight on how scripts translate into production and what writers should consider when developing their stories. About the Host: With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - Weapons (dir. Zach Cregger) - Barbarian - 28 Years Later Connect with us - https://thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com/ - Instagram: https://instagram.com/screenwriterpod - YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter Enjoyed this live episode? Don’t miss the next one—subscribe, rate, and share The Successful Screenwriter. Drop your screenwriting questions in the comments or DM Geoffrey for a chance to be featured in a future Q&A!   #ScreenwritingPodcast #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #WeaponsMovie #28YearsLater #ScreenwritingTips #FilmIndustry #LivePodcast

Geoffrey welcomes writer and filmmaker Kristy Leigh Lussier back for a brand-new hangoute episode. They dive into a horror binge of The Conjuring films, swap takes on wild fairy-tale reimaginings like The Ugly Stepsister, and share some of the worst (and most damaging) screenwriting advice floating around online. Plus, they break down the state of today’s industry and how Kristy rallied a 30-person crew to shoot a vertical micro-drama in Idaho. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - A simple Conjuring watch order to start your binge - Why the first Conjuring still holds up as one of the best modern horror films - How bold fairy-tale twists like The Ugly Stepsister can inspire fresh writing - Why “don’t write from your life” is terrible advice - How to find (or build) your own creative film community Key Moments - 00:00 Welcome and new format with Kristy - 01:27 Why The Conjuring inspires and how it builds tension with heart - 03:20 The Warrens and casting that anchors the franchise - 03:56 Where to start with the Conjuring watch order - 07:10 Geoffrey’s take on The Ugly Stepsister (and a quick content warning) - 09:20 Public-domain horror trend: Pooh, Bambi, Popeye, Steamboat Willie - 12:21 Bad advice of the week: “Do not write from your life” - 16:05 State of the industry and why self-starting matters - 18:55 Kristy’s vertical micro-drama and how a 30-person crew came together - 22:33 Final encouragement and plans to continue the series About the Guest Kristy Leigh Lussier is a screenwriter and filmmaker based in Boise. A horror fan with credits that include The Death of Snow White, she creates character-driven genre stories and recently directed a vertical micro-drama with a local crew. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - The Conjuring and The Conjuring 2 - Insidious, Saw - Jaws 50th anniversary IMAX release - The Ugly Stepsister (Amazon Prime) - Public-domain horror examples: Winnie the Pooh: Blood and Honey, Bambi reimagining, Steamboat Willie horror - Vertical micro-dramas and short-form series Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun - Website: https://thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com/ - Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod - YouTube: The Successful Screenwriter Enjoyed this format? Leave a comment with your favorite Conjuring-style watch order or a fairy-tale twist you’d love to see on screen. Don’t forget to subscribe and share this episode with a writer friend. #screenwriting #podcast #horror #Conjuring #filmmaking #indiefilm #writingadvice #storytelling #publicdomainhorror

In this lost episode from the archives, I sit down with the legendary screenwriting guru Linda Seger, author of Making a Good Script Great and a true pioneer of the script consulting profession. We dive deep into her decades of experience shaping stories, her approach to theme, structure, subplots, and images, and why great screenwriters are seekers of the human condition. Linda also shares insights on her new book How to Write Great Dialogue and what continues to inspire her after consulting on thousands of scripts. What You’ll Learn in This Episode: - How Linda Seger created the career of script consulting in Hollywood - The importance of images and visual thinking in screenwriting - Why subplots give your story dimension and depth - How to approach rewrites with purpose and focus - Tips for mastering dialogue and emotional shifts in scenes Key Moments: - (00:23) Linda’s groundbreaking journey into script consulting - (03:16) The power of images in storytelling - (06:39) Scene sequences vs. random scenes - (08:44) Why theme and central questions matter - (15:26) Breaking down the value of subplots About the Guest: Linda Seger is one of the world’s foremost script consultants, credited with creating the profession itself. She has consulted on over 2,000 scripts, worked with A-list directors like Ron Howard, and written numerous influential books on screenwriting, including Making a Good Script Great and How to Write Great Dialogue. About the Host: With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode: - Making a Good Script Great by Linda Seger - How to Write Great Dialogue by Linda Seger & John Winston Rainey - Seger Notes (film breakdown articles) Connect with Linda Seger: - Website: Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun: - https://thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com/ - https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod?utm_source=chatgpt.com - https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter?utm_source=chatgpt.com If you enjoyed this lost episode with Linda Seger, please like, share, and review the show. Don’t forget to subscribe for more industry insights and inspiration.  #Screenwriting #LindaSeger #ScriptConsulting #WritingTips #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter

In this lost episode from the archives, Geoffrey D. Calhoun sits down with screenwriting legend Dave Trottier, aka Dr. Format and author of The Screenwriter’s Bible. Together they explore the evolving rules of formatting, the balance of art and craft in screenwriting, and why clarity and consistency are vital to getting noticed in Hollywood. Dave also shares his insights on scriptments, bolding slug lines, writing natural dialogue, and building characters that leap off the page. What You’ll Learn in This Episode - Why screenwriting is both an art and a craft—and how to balance the two - How formatting guidelines evolve to improve readability for script readers - The growing trend of “scriptments” and who they really benefit - Tips on character descriptions that avoid clichés and create depth - How to write dialogue with clarity, subtext, and natural flow - Why exposition should emerge naturally rather than through obvious info dumps Key Moments - 00:23 – Welcoming Dave Trottier, Dr. Format and author of The Screenwriter’s Bible - 01:27 – Balancing art and craft in screenwriting - 03:27 – How formatting evolves with the industry - 07:45 – The rise of the “scriptment” and Dave’s reaction to it - 14:30 – Clarity, consistency, and avoiding reader confusion - 18:20 – Moving past superficial character descriptions - 23:26 – Writing natural dialogue and handling exposition - 26:01 – Subtext: one of the last, but most powerful skills to master About the Guest Dave Trottier is best known as Dr. Format, the go-to expert on screenwriting rules and formatting. He is the author of the industry-standard book The Screenwriter’s Bible and teaches courses on screenwriting at Script University and through his own platform https://www.keepwriting.com. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode - The Screenwriter’s Bible by Dave Trottier - https://www.keepwriting.com – Dave’s official website #ScreenwritingTips #ScreenwritersBible #LostEpisode #ScreenwritingPodcast #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter