Pamela Cochran
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Lifelong writer, aspiring author, mom of 2. Former lives as a talent booker & English teacher, now small biz owner w/ my hubs. Bibliophile, cinephile, serial hobbyist. I'm talking graveyards of crochet needles & ukuleles.
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Preparing for DVPit tomorrow and posting a new agent guide for my querying YA fantasy, THE KINDLER.

LEGENDBORN x KPOP DEMON HUNTERS

🇰🇷🇺🇸 2nd-gen coming-of-age
🤫 family secrets
❤️ power of friendship & self-acceptance
🌈 diverse ensemble cast
🔥 romantic subplot
✨ magic school but for nature lovers
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Blue and white background of a cloudy sky with yellow-white lightning cracking down

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An agent’s guide to THE KINDLER by P. A. Cochran
YA contemporary fantasy
94k words The pitch:

What’s trickier than straddling two worlds as an immigrant kid? Discovering there’s also a third. When Danbi digs up her estranged father’s secrets in a hidden world, she finds that and more: a magic-stealing serial killer on the hunt for her rare, energy-generating powers. Powers that might stop his rampage—if she could just figure out how to use them.

The comps:

Cover of Tracy Deonn’s LEGENDBORN and movie poster of KPOP DEMON HUNTERS

discovery of a secret world
identity, belonging & self-acceptance
coping with grief & shame
found family & the power of friendship The vibes:

Mood board with images of a snowy rowan tree, an aurora borealis, a lynx, an old book open in the forest, a torn family photograph, three friends watching a sunset, Gaudi architecture, an Alaskan landscape, and a girl whispering a secret in a boy’s ear

BIPOC FMC as chosen one
Second-gen coming-of-age story
Diverse ensemble cast
Portal fantasy through an immigrant lens
Magic school but make it for nature lovers
Slow burn x love triangle romantic subplot Opening lines:

My father’s death changes nothing. This is what I keep telling myself, ever since I got the news last week. You know it’s true when you have to keep repeating it.

I jam the mute button on the remote. The dry droning of the courtroom drama playing on the TV is setting my teeth on edge. But Eemobu reaches over from his ladder where he’s stocking a high shelf and unmutes it with a grunt. That’s probably the most interaction I’ll have with my uncle today.

I check the clock. 3:55.

Five more minutes, and I’m free. Five more minutes, and I’m done for the summer with this sticky four-aisle corner store where clock hands silent-crawl instead of tick. Five more minutes, and I can start finding answers. Hopefully.
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She definitely is. Hehe, I might bring up my ideas on that topic eventually… I think it’ll be revealed close to the beginning of the story anyway, so it probably wouldn’t be too spoiler-y to talk about it. But this is all still mostly unplanned, so I’ll have to wait and see if I change my mind! 😅
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I wrote a dragon age bard song just call me Maryden 😂
I am in so deep now I fear
What do you hear when no one's around you?
I want to know what puts light in your eyes
But you say that nothing's about you.
The world moves around you like ghosts in the night.

You're in the fire's ash
That warmed us through cold winter's darkness and pain.
Now a songbird echoes back.
You linger like petrichor after the rain.

Shadows are friends now that they contain you,
There to sow comfort when everything's wrong.
Still you say that nothing's about you.
Well too bad my friend because now there's a song.

Please don't wash away.
The hush of your voice is the wind in the leaves.
Our bond won't fade away
If you let me keep you in my memories.

All that you flew from needn't be frightful 
If you can see it with light in your eyes
How can you say that nothing's about you?
You keep our hearts strong as we hold up the sky.
pamelaelaela.bsky.social
Oooh very atmospheric! ✨💛
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One of my very favorite tropes! 💚
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It's hard not to love! The depiction of female friendship is the special sauce for me.

And Sam, I think you'll appreciate the animation too, given your healthy enjoyment of cartoons, as far as I've deduced 😆
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💚💚💚

I try to keep it subtle, but it's definitely there. 😊
pamelaelaela.bsky.social
#PlotTober 8

The story is going to start off with Annie finding out that Miles cheated on Nadia (her bestie), so the goal of destroying him is entirely new. Plus, Annie might have a few personal reasons why this goal will be more difficult for her to achieve than she wants to believe.
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#PlotTober Day 8: Conflicts for the MC

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8. What are some potential reasons the main character(s) haven't, couldn't, and/or can't pursue these goals yet? Consider other characters, backstory events, circumstances, environmental factors, etc.

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#PlotTober Day 8: Conflicts for the MC

Oh, Josh absolutely should not be pursuing his goals.

For one, he has very little idea what he is doing. He has never planned a murder before and has no special skills or competencies. So, he is figuring this out as he goes and could easily end up in jail. 🧵
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#PlotTober Day 8: Conflicts for the MC

Answer the prompt on the card by quoting this post. Remember, answering a prompt is always optional. Even if you don't share it publicly, I hope the prompt encourages you to think about it privately.

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#PlotTober - a WIP plotting game by @gunsmile.bsky.social

8. What are some potential reasons the main character(s) haven't, couldn't, and/or can't pursue these goals yet? Consider other characters, backstory events, circumstances, environmental factors, etc.

Remember: Use the #PlotTober hashtag, engage with others, and have fun!
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This sounds very fully imagined!
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#PlotTober 8

For the short term goal of graduating college & joining the clergy, Mem & Clara have a few obstacles.

Mem is suoer anxious either she or Clara won't pass one portion in particular because she's afraid it's going to come out that one of their charagmas (probably hers) is fake. Her 🧵
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#PlotTober Day 8: Conflicts for the MC

Answer the prompt on the card by quoting this post. Remember, answering a prompt is always optional. Even if you don't share it publicly, I hope the prompt encourages you to think about it privately.

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#PlotTober - a WIP plotting game by @gunsmile.bsky.social

8. What are some potential reasons the main character(s) haven't, couldn't, and/or can't pursue these goals yet? Consider other characters, backstory events, circumstances, environmental factors, etc.

Remember: Use the #PlotTober hashtag, engage with others, and have fun!
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#PlotTober 8

One factor slowing Wren and Spencer down is that Magnus Var Krugan and his Blackboot allies are actively searching for necklace. They are having to move with stealth rather than speed as the Magnus is wealthy and has his own personal army. 🧵

#WritingCommunity #WritingPrompt #WriteSky
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#PlotTober Day 8: Conflicts for the MC

Answer the prompt on the card by quoting this post. Remember, answering a prompt is always optional. Even if you don't share it publicly, I hope the prompt encourages you to think about it privately.

#WritingCommunity #WritingPrompt #WriteSky
#PlotTober - a WIP plotting game by @gunsmile.bsky.social

8. What are some potential reasons the main character(s) haven't, couldn't, and/or can't pursue these goals yet? Consider other characters, backstory events, circumstances, environmental factors, etc.

Remember: Use the #PlotTober hashtag, engage with others, and have fun!
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So many fun elements at play! This book sounds like an awesome action-adventure fantasy movie I'd watch a hundred times in a row
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#Plotober 8

The thing stopping Rose from making her mother proud is her current power levels.

The thing stopping Razor Lily from killing the Basilisk kaiju is her current power levels.

One isn't ready. One is past their prime. But the story doesn't care.

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#PlotTober Day 8: Conflicts for the MC

Answer the prompt on the card by quoting this post. Remember, answering a prompt is always optional. Even if you don't share it publicly, I hope the prompt encourages you to think about it privately.

#WritingCommunity #WritingPrompt #WriteSky
#PlotTober - a WIP plotting game by @gunsmile.bsky.social

8. What are some potential reasons the main character(s) haven't, couldn't, and/or can't pursue these goals yet? Consider other characters, backstory events, circumstances, environmental factors, etc.

Remember: Use the #PlotTober hashtag, engage with others, and have fun!
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Happy #PlotTober 8!

In this third book, Edie wants to repair some relationships and continue to justify decisions she made in book 2. Those relationships are jeopardized by those decisions, so Edie has to navigate between what she and they want.
As for the recent Bludeye supernatural hijinks...
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#PlotTober Day 8: Conflicts for the MC

Answer the prompt on the card by quoting this post. Remember, answering a prompt is always optional. Even if you don't share it publicly, I hope the prompt encourages you to think about it privately.

#WritingCommunity #WritingPrompt #WriteSky
#PlotTober - a WIP plotting game by @gunsmile.bsky.social

8. What are some potential reasons the main character(s) haven't, couldn't, and/or can't pursue these goals yet? Consider other characters, backstory events, circumstances, environmental factors, etc.

Remember: Use the #PlotTober hashtag, engage with others, and have fun!
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Poor Edie 🙁 Is she alone in all this, or does at least one of those relationships give her someone to confide in?
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October 8 #WIPsnips – “dungeon”

No dungeons in this snippet from “This Ends Now,” but the dank cellar of Lainey’s worst memories is where she keeps thoughts of her first, worst love. She’s forbidden herself from peeking inside—only terrors dwell there. Handsome, rotten terrors named Gregory Shipp.
The night before we left for Lost Acre, I broke one of my rules. I let myself peer inside the room I kept the bastard in, in the furthest, foulest corner of my mind’s cellar. Little Lainey lived there, too, and she was so sad, and he so awful, that I didn’t want to revisit their cheap little scenes. Nothing ever changed—the players jangled their bones the same, spoke the same, raved and cried and loved the same. There was nothing new to learn.

Looking this time through the keyhole, much seemed unchanged over the years, a bit dustier, a bit more faded. Little Lainey still made herself small, small, so small. Small enough to fit inside of him. And he—strong and tall and brilliant—reminded her in his seedy, silky tone that she hadn’t been quite as clever before he walked into her life and into her mind to sweep away the clutter. Without the clutter, there was more room for him, and wasn’t it marvelous that their thoughts and moods now echoed each other, chimed in each other’s tones? They’d become parts of one another.

Isn’t it romantic?
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I'd read this in a heartbeat!
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A different instrument for every day of the week?
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This looks amazing! The setting sounds truly magical ✨
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Thanks, Amanda 🤗 I do love me some gorgeous mountains!
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Love the sound of this, and what a gorgeous mood board!