Jane Dougherty
@janedougherty47.bsky.social
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Writer of fiction and poetry, lives in a green fortress. Not interested in 'communities'. Learn to live together, the rest of the natural world manages to. Visit my Substack https://substack.com/@janedougherty47 for short fiction and poetry
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janedougherty47.bsky.social
So delicately phrased, no warrior-woman self-congratulation, just quiet, picking myself up and getting on with it. (I didn't know this about you, but I should have done. I have the same charcoal dots, same place).
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merrildsmith.bsky.social
Good morning! I wasn't going to do this prompt for #PoemsAbout #imperfectMe but started writing it yesterday @paulwritespoems.bsky.social writing group. It's still rough. Thanks as always to @alanparrywriter.co.uk and @thebrokenspine.co.uk
Poem:

Still Standing 

The scar on my right breast
a faint tracing,
the charcoal under the artist’s paint,

tattooed dots,
ellipsis signaling the story continues—

always a before
and an after--

so far, always an after--

the sagging of flesh, the greying of hair,
points for endurance, if not for style,

as vain as anyone, I suppose,
but embracing the imperfect,
me.
janedougherty47.bsky.social
Congratulations! I'm going to look at the details now.
janedougherty47.bsky.social
Thank you! When the subject is 'me', imperfect or otherwise, the less said the better 💙
janedougherty47.bsky.social
Thanks Alan. Between humility and awe is exactly where we ought to sit, I believe.
janedougherty47.bsky.social
I'm sure I'll know when to stop.
janedougherty47.bsky.social
It did. I was just having a conversation with someone about grammar so it tickled me that you have put it into a poem.
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carolynthomas.bsky.social
For #PoemsAbout #ImperfectMe Posting my effort now but madly busy so will try to catch up with everyone’s work later - the ones I have seen are great 😊
@alanparrywriter.co.uk
@thebrokenspine.co.uk
janedougherty47.bsky.social
That was a bit cheeky, but I like the idea of putting the reader on the spot 😀 I find it intriguing, not so much why so many people think that their experiences are fascinating, but why so many people seem to find them fascinating.
janedougherty47.bsky.social
It might be just an impression, but it seems to me that's there's suddenly several billion people who think they are the nombril of the universe. We have reached a shattering degree of narcissism!
janedougherty47.bsky.social
I think I'm getting close. It's a long way up from the bottom.
janedougherty47.bsky.social
Sometimes there doesn't have to be any reason at all. Disappointment perhaps. Powerfully told.
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johnchmura.bsky.social
#PoemsAbout #ImperfectMe
@thebrokenspine.co.uk
I will put a reel in the comments.
IMPERFECT ME

On days my son was measured
in length rather than height
I held him shirtless in one arm
while I lathered my face to shave.
Leaned on my chest, warm,
he plunged an explorer’s hands, decisive,
into my foamy cheeks, gaining agency,
the intimation of form, and play
affirmed in his corporeal birthright.

And me, significant, generative,
like the god of the psalmist,
I could do no wrong.

Whiskey it wasn’t that imperfected me
in his eyes. I may never know
which particular betrayal
inspired that loss of grace.
But it did boost his swagger to say
for the first time fuck you, Dad,
and I absorbed the preordained assertion,
concussive, cracked like a plastic bucket
abandoned on the back porch
when water expands into ice.
janedougherty47.bsky.social
Childhood illnesses leave their mark, like mothers.
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palimpsest22.bsky.social
#PoemsAbout #ImperfectMe
Thanks @thebrokenspine.co.uk @alanparrywriter.co.uk for nudging me into discomfort writing. Started life in @wendypratt.bsky.social workshop,been festering.
Poem called Face Cream by Sarah O'Grady.
janedougherty47.bsky.social
So quiet, no noise, just trying. It's all we can do, isn't it?
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davidbirch.bsky.social
Thanks again @alanparrywriter.co.uk @thebrokenspine.co.uk for an excellent #PoemsAbout prompt #ImperfectMe. Here's a poem about the imperfection of yielding to hope over experience
janedougherty47.bsky.social
Small, but makes my point, I hope 💙