Glenn Barker
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[My words] "are shut up tight inside themselves like boxes, yet they would open up, unfolding quite wonderfully, if only" [I could interest them], Sylvia Plath
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Have you got your 'Beautiful Little Fools: Poetry of Glamour Obsession and the Gilded Age' yet?

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Thank you @thebrokenspine.co.uk editors @alanparrywriter.co.uk and @karenpgonzalez.bsky.social for selecting 'Beautiful Untouchable' and 'Let's Pretend' in superb hardback format.
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Oh, the fragility of souls hammered into a frozen and sensitised stasis.
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Thank you Dean; it all came out after a lot of washing and rinsing words. Spare but clean. 😎
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Yes, and somewhat gross and raw, raw-fleshed.
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I'm always left asking where that violence comes from, or rather, who.
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Time may stop and hold us prisoner, or we may want it move quickly, for it to be over or never have happened. And we are left with the inevitable scarring, mind and body, with time the inanimate observer.
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Another #poem that can speak for herself. #PoemsAbout #ImperfectMe @alanparrywriter.co.uk @thebrokenspine.co.uk #StayCreative #PoetsSupportPoets #PoetsOfBlueSky
My Clock
   

Bare feet on the hour hand
metal edge slicing my soles

I cannot stop time.

Fingers on razored minute hand
pushing hard to rewind the moments

I cannot stop.

Tick tock, tick tock.

His touching me like that 
has already happened

too many times.
A warped cycle.

I cannot  

even slow down the seconds
of innocence lost.

Tick tock, tick tock.


Karen Pierce Gonzalez
rotherwrites.bsky.social
An interesting thought; how we depend on others to keep us real and straight Andy, obscuring our realisation that they may in turn be depending on us for the same. We are no island.
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Turning the imperfection around into an honest reflection of why a relationship failed for #poemsabout #imperfectme. Thanks to @alanparrywriter.co.uk & @thebrokenspine.co.uk for the prompt and glad to be back writing after an enforced break!
What you wanted 

you wanted someone 
to save you
rescue you 
from past mistakes

someone fearless
their perfect life
sorted out
to sort yours too

without you 
giving any energy
or second thought
to what kept them 

awake
long into the night
if they exist 
it isn’t me
rotherwrites.bsky.social
This resounds starkly with the imagery and angst-ridden output of the German Expressionist movement Jan. Pain and purgatory. Unsettling Gothicism.
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#adaptation: ©Jan Peters/Solivagant Wisdom, 2025

#Expressionism #Trakl #PoetryInTranslation #DepthPsychology #TheShadow #CainAndAbel #Blake #Nightmare
Dread 

After Das Grauen (1909) by
Austrian Expressionist poet, Georg Trakl (1887-1914) 

I drift through deserted rooms.
Frenzied stars dance upon a blue backdrop.
Dogs bay in beck-rimmed yards.
Manic chinook roots through the treetops.

Then all stir ceases.
Aglow with choleric ardour, 
Venomous blooms sprout from my mouth.
Blood-drip sap from marred branches 
Shimmers pale as dew. 

From the mirror’s specious void,
From the mirror’s pearly shade,
Contours merge vaguely into the 
Visage of Cain.

Curtains rustle softly.
The moon stares vacantly 
Through the window.
I’m alone with my killer.


Free adaptation from the German:
©Jan Peters/Solivagant Wisdom, 2025

"The Body of Abel Found by Adam & Eve", William Blake, circa 1826
rotherwrites.bsky.social
You pull off the humour with that deeper edge well John. A person or the bowels of Gaia. We're all fragile tessellations rubbing together, until polished.
(I may be off at a tangent though)
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For #PoemsAbout #ImperfectMe on #worldmentalhealthday, here's one of mine posted here earlier this year 🤜🤛
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Insecurity alert

We can argue the toss
over separations
and losses, but this much
is for sure – I am insecurely

attached. Mostly I depend upon
your warmth and acclaim
to scaffold the edifice
of my ramshackle sense of self.

But hey – no pressure!
It's not like you owe me any
special consideration – no need,
as such, to frack my mudrock offerings

for depth or distinction.
I'm not proud – I can do
naked and abandoned in the void
every bit as easily.
rotherwrites.bsky.social
Thank you Carolyn. The genesis was much more protracted than its simplicity implies, even for so few lines. 💚
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Sparse indeed; than you Jan. It came about from a supposed quote about Michaelangelo(?) when asked how he knew what to chisel, to remove; to which he says that he removed nothing, but simply revealed what was already there.
rotherwrites.bsky.social
I like the way this turns darkness to light, with that repeated first line. There is always hope; things happening for the person in the mirror rather than to them. 💚
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A piece from my would-be manuscript (probably now a zine series because I'm now a zine-obsessed twaffle) "Behind the Mirror". A bit more simplistic than my usual fair, but it's got a hopeful side to it that you may appreciate. Enjoy 🤗

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Behind the mirror
sits the woman
I hope to become

So much more a sister
a daughter, a partner, a friend
so much more than the sum

of all my pieces
once jagged now soft
from trying to put me together again.

Even a shattered prism
shows a rainbow cavalcade
when put to the light.

Behind the mirror
sits the woman
I hope to become

From this shade
of past folly
a paragon of future promise


-Lin Hart
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fiftywords.bsky.social
This is beautifully spare, each phrase feels carved, not written
rotherwrites.bsky.social
Thank you Fifty. I thought it looked a bit too spare, but less can be more. As I was writing it I was inhabiting the rock, clay and marble; how they might feel. So yes, I was mentally carving! ⚒️
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The perfection of our own imperfection Debbie; how we find a way to shed society's skin and become ourselves. A life process.
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Good morning #BlueskyPoetry Community. A grand start for #PoemsAbout #ImperfectMe today. @alanparrywriter.co.uk & @thebrokenspine.co.uk here’s my experimental draft. Weird form for the 1st but the rhyme is intentional. 2nd’s a Haiku as it seemed appropriate. Will catch up on the rest later. Thanks.
A poem by Debbie Ross

Super Model
I used to be bothered about my hips, my tits, my lips - all the bits that didn't conform to some societal norm of what a girl should be
it was my Dad who shaped me - never good enough at what was important to him.
Now
I embrace the 'flaws':
the love of books and poetry,
the lines of learning, this errant body -
imperfect, perfect ME. A photo of a grey bowl with the text of a poem by Debbie Ross overlaid as follows

Kintsukuroi 金繕
We are travellers filling our imperfections with thin lines of gold

A definition of kintsukuroi underneath

kintsukuroi
(n.) (v. phr.) "to repair with gold"; the Japanese art of repairing pottery with gold or silver lacquer and understanding that the piece is more beautiful for having been broken.
rotherwrites.bsky.social
The mirror, the person in it, both you and not you. This is a bold and violent voice Paul, the narrator gripped by loathing. Who am I. Time to face the world; hello 'Stepford' me. Peace is the final grace, though it takes until the twelfth of Never.
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How is it Friday?!

This week it’s #PoemsAbout #ImperfectMe

This is ‘Sudden Impacts & Ripples’

Will try to catch up through the day and after work.

@alanparrywriter.co.uk @thebrokenspine.co.uk great to see the community growing
Sudden Impacts & Ripples

i punched a mirror once.
watched the glass splinter 
outward 
like quicksilver tremor

there was my true face
a clusterfuck 

abandoned mineshaft eyes 
knucklefat nose 
lips midgrimace / midgrin
receding-tide hairline 

behind flesh was mayhem—
psyche spinning between 
self love  / self loathe 
self doubt / self determination 

impatience is a virtue— 
i ripped face from wall 
abandoned to landfill

replaced it with  
Stepford smile.
rotherwrites.bsky.social
Thank you John; I wasn't sure. It felt that giving them a kind of voice allowed the Creator's imperfections to show through. They could have said anything imperfect though.
There's nothing worse than a block of marble scorned, we might have said a while back.
rotherwrites.bsky.social
Thank you Debbie 💚 It was that feeling I occasionally have about a poem that can never settle. Those three italicised voice lines could be written in so many ways....
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This is reality's grit John, how the perfection of man, the innocent at birth is drawn out of us, the the products of human creation twisted out of shape; rejection from Eden, forever. A phenomenal piece.