Kyle Marquis
@moochava.bsky.social
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he/him. Writer and game designer. Silverworld, V:TM—Night Road, Pon Para. Werewolf: The Apocalypse — The Book of Hungry Names is out now! https://www.choiceofgames.com/werewolf-the-apocalypse/book-of-hungry-names/
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moochava.bsky.social
Werewolf: The Apocalypse — The Book of Hungry Names is a horror text adventure set in the World of Darkness. Face monsters and mysteries as a werewolf determined to rebuild a shattered pack. Play the first five chapters for free!
Werewolf: The Apocalypse — The Book of Hungry Names
Save the living earth with Rage and spirit! Can your shattered werewolf pack defeat a Wyrm Spirit who manifests as a lie that you want to believe?
www.choiceofgames.com
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moochava.bsky.social
Update: a fantastic opera. Fun crowd too, which is always nice. Just plowed through 4,000 calories worth of pastrami at Sarge's; time to waddle back to Massachusetts
moochava.bsky.social
Absolute packed house at the Lincoln Center for the opera version of The Amazing Adventures of Kavalier & Clay. It's intermission right now and the lobby is a zoo.
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k-a-aitch.bsky.social
Lincoln Center keeps it classy
Written in tasteful, brushed chrome letters: all gender restroom. This restroom may be used by any person regardless of gender identity or expression
moochava.bsky.social
A lot of you on here need to step up and help your girlfriends' husbands
drewharwell.com
Military families on day 9 of the shutdown lining up at the food bank
moochava.bsky.social
In New York for the day, hanging around and waiting for a show to start
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pixelatedboat.bsky.social
In my opinion it’s time to retire the Nobel prizes for fields where most of the important discoveries have already been made, like physics, and add prizes for newer fields where substantial innovations occur every year, like speedrunning
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dennywhere.bsky.social
You can microwave your soup with a spoon in it if you're pure of heart
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daveprosper.bsky.social
I am going to be on NCPR tomorrow (Saturday Oct 11) presenting an Italo Disco hour for the 3:00 Special, and the chyron they chose for me is incredible
a red haired man in glasses with the chyron: David Prosper, Loves UFOs
moochava.bsky.social
"I make ballistic armor for school pets"

"And I love UFOs"

"Our budget is 13.4 million dollars"
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juniorhoncho.bsky.social
newly released body cam footage seems to contradict initial reports that federal agents opened fire only after a woman, who had "hulked out" and "become huge," began using "hulk strength" to smash them. gotta admit, this one did feel a little fishy when i was reporting it as fact yesterday
moochava.bsky.social
Fun to watch an action movie and entertain fantasies of badassery even for a moment, then go work out and get winded by switching the weights around (they're heavy even when you're not lifting-lifting them, what the hell)
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ryannorth.ca
In video games, you will often find a fully roasted chicken abandoned on the ground, and eating it extremely quickly makes you feel better. What's less known is that this is also true in real life
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gwenckatz.bsky.social
This Project Gutenberg book contains what I assume is an OCR error, but I'm really drawing a blank on what it's supposed to be.
“They
had not a notion how poor people feel, still less poor people poorer
than before—or how they regard the rich who have what they have
lost. They did not understand any huftian feeling—not even the
silliness they called LOVE—a godless, mindless affair,”
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moochava.bsky.social
Which runs the risk of—ok, the first time I consciously recognized awful writing was in The Dragon Reborn, where Jordan gets it into his head that the Lady Pope came from a fishing tribe, so all her internal monologue is fishing-metaphor-related, that's a risk. But it's better than generic language.
moochava.bsky.social
I haven't written down most of it, actually—maybe I should? I'm editing a chapter right now and most of what I'm doing is, "could anyone say this? if so, rewrite it until only this character could say this."
moochava.bsky.social
oh and removing Simpsons references for people born in the 21st century, as much as it pained me to do that
moochava.bsky.social
I also have never been to therapy, but I read enough modern fiction that now I'm adding "check for therapy speak" to my list of editing tasks for my own writing, along with my unwritten list of stock-phrases-to-be-removed and a full ctrl+F for every word ending in "-ly"
moochava.bsky.social
Here's some advice: when one character asks another "why are you feeling this way?" the asked character should respond by throwing a laptop into rush hour traffic. That's much more interesting!
moochava.bsky.social
Therapy-speak is a situation where a writing habit is both annoying to me personally and just bad under most circumstances. Few stories are improved by characters who understand what motivates them.
moochava.bsky.social
The problem is that therapy-speak is common among 1% of humans and like 80% of people who write for TV. You sound like freaks! You sound like Christian fundamentalists rambling about Grace and the Holy Spirit!
moochava.bsky.social
As someone who doesn't go to therapy (100% sane and normal) this stuff is agony. Not only is it only believable for a small percentage of the population, I don't like those people! And not in the way I don't like meth dealers or murderous vigilantes, they're just annoying!
rowan.monster
I'd really appreciate if writers these days took a look at their characters doing therapyspeak and whether that's appropriate for their work and their world.

By "therapyspeak" I mean speaking like this: "This is the emotion I'm feeling, and feeling that emotion makes me want to act in a way"
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jrbolt.bsky.social
Agreed, and more than this, the presence of therapyspeak tends to undergird the premise that fiction should be reassuring and redemptive. This is, itself, bullshit
rowan.monster
I'd really appreciate if writers these days took a look at their characters doing therapyspeak and whether that's appropriate for their work and their world.

By "therapyspeak" I mean speaking like this: "This is the emotion I'm feeling, and feeling that emotion makes me want to act in a way"
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gendercoffin.bsky.social
Nobody could have imagined the future world that would find this funny and why
A boy running alongside a train with a bindle on a stick. A word balloon reads “I’m through with school- it’s only for sissies anyway. I’ll run away and- and make money with my FEET”